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[k_pop4life]

Title: The Sound of a Heartbeat

Pairing: Jongkey. Vampire!AU

Rating: R

Words: 1,300+

Summary: The night brings with her mysterious creatures that lurk in the dark.

Comments

[k_pop4life]

wow! i seriously sat in front of my computer for a while not knowing how to reply to this. Your comment is not pointless or lame at all. In fact, i really appreciate it. Thank you for the honesty, i know this is not even close to being a good story because I am only starting to get into writing as a hobby and I don't do it often enough to develop more skills. I also need to write what it's on my mind at the same sitting otherwise i'll lose motivation to finish it which might explain why a lot of what i write is short.

Anyhow, I am really glad you enjoyed it and that it gave you that impression because I wanted it to feel creepy and I wanted jonghyun to take advantage of Key's emotional vulnerability. I am actually really happy to hear that I did a good job at developing jonghyun's image because i feel like one of the things that i lack when i write are descriptions and details.

I will seriously think about adding more to the story but like i keep mentioning to other people, i can't promise anything as of now. my classes keep demanding all of my attention!

Thank you for thanking the time to comment, it means a lot to get some feedback on what I'm writing. Have a great week ♥

[darkanoir]

I'm glad you appreciated the comment and don't worry, it was a pleasure to leave you one :)
Btw, you misunderstood me! I said this isn't the best vampire story out there, but this doesn't mean "it isn't anywhere near good". Don't think so low of this shot of yours, as I've said, it was really nice and it was also full of potential if developed just a tad more^^

Btw, I can fully understand that writing a sequel isn't simple, 'cause finding time isn't always that easy and also because inspiration can be an even bigger enemy. So, don't worry if you won't be able to!^^

Well...have a good day!^^ (or evening...? Idk lol)

[k_pop4life]

Oh no I understand but I'm always harsher on myself and whatnot. aren't we all? I think i need to work on developing my ideas with more detail.

Evening! which reminds me i REALLY have to get started on studying for my tests next week!

[darkanoir]

lol good luck with that, then!^^

[k_pop4life]

Thank you darling!