almost cinderella

Jan 21, 2014 01:17

almost cinderella
suho/yura (junmyeon/ahyoung), 5,450, pg-13.
and what's wrong with that? they do say friends make the best lovers.
a/n: WHY DO I WRITE TOO MUCH. PLEASE SLAP ME. I have never written this much. I'm scared.
a/n#2: i made an 8tracks mix that basically helped me write this thing ugh. listening to it sets the mood a bit.

i like you )

f: exo, rating: pg-13, pairing: suho/yura, f: girl's day, m: suho, m: yura

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silentlybelieve January 21 2014, 08:44:14 UTC
spot for thunggyu

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thunggyu January 23 2014, 13:27:45 UTC
baby girl, this was soooo good ♡

i really enjoyed the light, fluffy tone the whole fic has going on and how junmyeon and ahyoung are complementary and fit the other so well :3 and i am always imagining junmyeon as being cheesy so his pick-up line was just so on point!! ; w ; i also loved how at the same time, he didn't say it seriously and instead put himself on the line in such a ridiculous manner? ;; but awww, it worked! :3

plus, i love the flow of their relationship and how they both took things like they came without wanting to label anything or wondering about it too much. it just gave a really natural, casual tone that i liked ; n ;

baekhyun's grandmom reference really made me smile and think of showtime haha! ;_; and the trolling by baekchen is just cute (and since i'm obviously baekchen biased i can't say otherwise ofc!) also, sehun/hyeri and jongin/soojung n________n

it was my first exoday fic and i don't regret it at all - i'm happy it was this one ♡ thank you for the great moment, bbgirl!

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silentlybelieve January 24 2014, 21:27:35 UTC
thank you ; u ; i was so afraid of it just being word vomit because i finished at like 3 in the morning e n e
don't we all imagine junmyeon being the cheesiest thing?
yes! i added in baekhyun's grandmother for a reason because lay always wanted to visit her!
well, looks like his wish came true in my fic mWA HA HA. I MAKE DREAMS COME TRUE.
i just had to include all those side characters. i really like nice working side characters because they make the story more interesting yehet (sehun should stop because i'm being influenced oh noes)
that's such a big compliment!!! HIDES IN A HOLE FOREVER. ♥ but thanks for reading

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eternal_hopes January 21 2014, 09:15:22 UTC
...............

i don't even know where to begin--- I'M JUST UTTERLY SPEECHLESS RIGHT NOW.
but okay sobs, this whole fic is so so adorable and i was smiling, laughing, grinning the whole time like the idiot i am bc of all the humor you put in here.
the way you describe your characters is so on-point and i can imagine each and every scene vividly in my mind.
i love all the side-couples you put in here ((your biasness for sehun/hyeri can't be anymore obvious but hey i'm not on to complain)) - love the fact that they also played a part in bringing junmyeon and ahyoung together <3 ( ... )

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silentlybelieve January 24 2014, 21:22:59 UTC
i---- i'm glad it made you happy ; w ; i think that was my purpose with the whole story.
FLUFF. FLUFF EVERYWHERE. i was never a good angst writer so might as well do fluff, eh?
yeah it was pretty obvious but i just had to include them as the matchmakers cRIES
I WAS SO DIVIDED WHETHER I SHOULD HAVE INCLUDED THAT SCENE BECAUSE SO CHEESY.
but it happens in all the kdramas and i was like AH SCREW IT. JUST DOING IT.
thanks bb cakes ; u ; i'll try to write more exoday wheezes ♥
I HAD TO INCLUDE SASSY EXO OKAY. IT WAS LIKE A MUST.

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kisoap January 21 2014, 23:52:56 UTC
spot!

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kurdoodle January 22 2014, 00:36:16 UTC
spot! will read in a few hours :) wait for meeee! /excited

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summerfeels January 22 2014, 03:00:43 UTC
“Ahyoung-ssi, do you believe in love at first sight, or should I walk by again?”
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssyyyyy

cute fic :)

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silentlybelieve January 24 2014, 21:23:17 UTC
thank you for reading, darling ♥ glad you found it cute ; v ;

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