almost cinderella

Jan 21, 2014 01:17

almost cinderella
suho/yura (junmyeon/ahyoung), 5,450, pg-13.
and what's wrong with that? they do say friends make the best lovers.
a/n: WHY DO I WRITE TOO MUCH. PLEASE SLAP ME. I have never written this much. I'm scared.
a/n#2: i made an 8tracks mix that basically helped me write this thing ugh. listening to it sets the mood a bit.

i like you )

f: exo, rating: pg-13, pairing: suho/yura, f: girl's day, m: suho, m: yura

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eternal_hopes January 21 2014, 09:15:22 UTC
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i don't even know where to begin--- I'M JUST UTTERLY SPEECHLESS RIGHT NOW.
but okay sobs, this whole fic is so so adorable and i was smiling, laughing, grinning the whole time like the idiot i am bc of all the humor you put in here.
the way you describe your characters is so on-point and i can imagine each and every scene vividly in my mind.
i love all the side-couples you put in here ((your biasness for sehun/hyeri can't be anymore obvious but hey i'm not on to complain)) - love the fact that they also played a part in bringing junmyeon and ahyoung together <3

the ending couldn't be anymore perfect ~ my toes were curling at their kiss but only bc it's so asdfgklsh imagining suho in that way but ahhh too cute & sweet ;3;

the scene where she fell and he caught her in his arms I JUST--- okay, such a cheesy scene but it still works everytime weeps ;;;;
and oh - i also like how ahyoung took charge mostly; like she how she initiated things bc to wait around for junmyeon might just take more than awhile /cues rolling of eyes

idk what you were so worried about, this is all kinds of perfect ;uu; you've done a good job & i was definitely enlightened. can't wait for more exoday from you ♥

EDIT; and i just want to add how much i want to smack each of the boys; BAEKCHEN IN PARTICULAR bc of Jongdae's normal sass/troll self and byunbaek's butt comment OTL

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silentlybelieve January 24 2014, 21:22:59 UTC
i---- i'm glad it made you happy ; w ; i think that was my purpose with the whole story.
FLUFF. FLUFF EVERYWHERE. i was never a good angst writer so might as well do fluff, eh?
yeah it was pretty obvious but i just had to include them as the matchmakers cRIES
I WAS SO DIVIDED WHETHER I SHOULD HAVE INCLUDED THAT SCENE BECAUSE SO CHEESY.
but it happens in all the kdramas and i was like AH SCREW IT. JUST DOING IT.
thanks bb cakes ; u ; i'll try to write more exoday wheezes ♥
I HAD TO INCLUDE SASSY EXO OKAY. IT WAS LIKE A MUST.

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