Tales Of A Time Agency - 5B/?

[just_being_me08]

Title: Tales of A Time Agency - 5/?

Rating: 15 to NC-17 to be safe.

Characters: Jack, Ianto, John Hart, Toshiko, Owen, Gwen, Martha, The Doctor

Pairings:  Predominantly Jack/Ianto (eventually), but it’s the Time Agency so expect Jack/John, Tosh/Owen, John/the consenting population of the universe……
Chapter:  Chapter Number Five.

Spoilers:

Comments

[morgia]

Bonsoir beauté anglaise

[just_being_me08]

Bonsoir Nadine! (Beaute anglaise? Merci beaucoup ma chere! :D)

I'm sorry to hear that you are stressed! Is it about your finding a flat or something else? *sends you lots and lots of hugs* But still, thank you so much for taking the time to read this! :D

Don't worry about being honest, I appreciate it you know that. The first part, I understand what you mean....it did feel a little incomplete, but it was really preparation for the plot that is coming later on in the series. (Sorry to hear that you don't like Tosh/Owen!) I'm glad you liked the tension with Jack and Ianto though. I'm sorry I didn't give you enough this time, but that just gives me something to work harder at and improve on in the next chapter right? After all, improving my writing is what I am aiming for here, and I can't do it without your honest comments! So thank you Nadine, honestly! :D

*lots more hugs for Nadine*
Sian
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[morgia]

Hooo ma belle Sian,
I was a little bit anxious about my comment, but I knew you will understand why I wrote this. Its hard to be honest because I don't want to hurt you, and I think its very important to be fair with your writting. I told you before, you have talent and you don't have the right to sit down on this (lol this make sense ? In french we have this lovely expression: s'assoir sur ses lauriers !! ) Well, I'm very proud you took the critics like this ma chérie, is all in your honor (ok, an other expression I translate directly French vs English: c'est tout en ton honneur !)
Well, I have a lot of stress because the new flat (I wait for the decision credit, maybe I found one !!) and because my contract finish in next week, but I have a rendez-vous at Montréal for the contract possibility... (cross fingers )
Well, take care ma charmante anglaise, I wait impatiently for your next chapter
Nadine
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Big hugs et gros calins
P.S
I have an other idea for a new fic, maybe this week-end I will send you... ;)

[just_being_me08]

Hello again! :D

Oh don't be anxious Nadine, honestly. You know that I love hearing what you think, good or bad, it doesn't matter. I adore your honesty. I'm just so proud that you think I have a talent and believe in me, that's all I could ask for really. (I love that french expression!) And the way I understand things, you can't really be a writer unless you can accept both good and bad comments. :)

Ohhhh I'm glad you have found a new flat, I really hope that you're credit works out *fingers crossed for you there ma chere* And a new contract? That sounds great, I'll have my fingers crossed for that too. :D *sends you lots more big hugs*

Sian
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A new fic? YAY!!!! That's great news! I will wait impatiently to read it and beta it for you! :D

[thrace_adams]

I liked both parts. The bit with Tosh and Owen - the note was very sweet. Funny that Tosh was so distracted and that Owen picked up on him...BUT the Jack/Ianto stuff was brilliant! The UST between them and the shooting scene were just spectacularly hot. I found my heart beating just a tiny bit faster and I was holding my breath during part of it. Really well done. And John walks in a ruins it *frowns at him*

[just_being_me08]

Yay! *dances* I'm sorry for it being so long. I'm glad that you liked the tosh/owen parts too. :) I'm so glad that I managed to get the tension right, because that was the effect that I was working towards! Thanks so much for reading! Lol....yes, typically John just blunders in, silly man. :P

[unrequited1984]

*slaps John* Stupid Hart! I'm identifying with both Ianto and Jack when it comes to John. Kill him, thank him or kiss him...such choices and they all sound good! I do agree with Ianto that Jack's not ready for what Ianto wants. So I'm looking forward to watching the boys slowly move together. Very awesome chapters!

[just_being_me08]

John...love him or hate him he sure keeps things interesting. :P You're definitely right though, they do all sound so good! Like you said, the boys are moving together, even if it is at a snails pace in parts... Thank you so much! :D

[arikata]

man i love this! can't wait for the next chapter *Squirms*

[just_being_me08]

Yay, I'm so glad you love it, thank you.
There'll be more very soon I promise. :D

[missthingsplace]

Oooh, i love this so much. Both parts were great and bah to John for walking in and interrupting them ... Ianto, you know you want Jack really, just go with the flow *grins*

So can't wait for the next chapter.

[just_being_me08]

You love it? Thank you so much! :D I'm so pleased that you enjoyed both parts. John was just being typical John, and as for Ianto....well his willpower almost failed lol. I'll update soon! :D