Tales Of A Time Agency - 5B/?

[just_being_me08]

Title: Tales of A Time Agency - 5/?

Rating: 15 to NC-17 to be safe.

Characters: Jack, Ianto, John Hart, Toshiko, Owen, Gwen, Martha, The Doctor

Pairings:  Predominantly Jack/Ianto (eventually), but it’s the Time Agency so expect Jack/John, Tosh/Owen, John/the consenting population of the universe……
Chapter:  Chapter Number Five.

Spoilers:

Comments

[isarae]

(Having read 4,5a and 5b in a row)

Hehe..the Doctor showed up! That made me smile. Who'd have though he'd be at the time Agency teaching Space-Time Ethics? It DOES suit him.. I like the way you've..how do I explain it? Kind of..the subtext. If I were talking about Chekov, I'd say dangling conversations and juxtaposition. But I'm not. Same effect, anyway. An example would be the way Tosh's tutor interrupted Tosh.

Anyway. I shouldn't ramble..I loved the shooting scene though.

[just_being_me08]

(goodness me! You are very brave! *awards medal*)

Yes, he did! It was a little joke to myself about the time ethics, but I really glad you thought it suited him too. Don't worry, though I adore a slight ramble in comments, as you may have noticed I ramble equally as much in my replies. :P About the sub text....thank you, I'm glad you got that. It was deliberate in certain points of this chapter. Thanks so much for your comment though, I hope you like the rest of the series just as much! :)

[isarae]

(Yay! I got a medal!! *dances*)

Oh dear..The idea of the Doctor as an ethics teacher keeps catching me off guard at random moments and making me laugh. I wonder what will happen if I were to go and watch an episode where he talks about not meddling with the past etc.? Hehehe..

[just_being_me08]

(*joins in the dancing, just because she can*)

I'm glad that it makes you laugh...it was supposed to have that effect honest. I can't imagine what you may do if you do go watch one of those episodes though.... :P

[naddypants]

Well, what can I say about 5B?
It was brilliant to be honest.

And I loved that Owen is really trying for Tosh! Bless her she took a while to get where he was going, but bless Owen for being so nice. I wanna hug him for it!

As for Jack and Ianto and...you really had me going "BUT THEY'RE FRIENDS!!!" until John showed up! And then John showed up...and was rude! Love the use of Eye Candy though! Fits. :)

So, as usual, I loved it, and I can't wait for more. :)
I really want to know how Ianto's doing with his muddled up feelings, and Tosh too! :)

*happy dance as hands out coffee and cake and...other stuff LOL* The grammar in that was so bad I wouldn't be surprised if it made no sense. :P

love, naddy
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[just_being_me08]

Brilliant? *Hugs Naddy ridiculously hard* Yay!! Thank you so much sweetie, you're so lovely. :D

Haha yes, Tosh wasn't firing on all cylinders so to speak... (must have been the blood loss :P) but Owen was uncharacteristically sweet here. Let's just hope they don't get found out...

Yay, I'm glad I managed that! It's John so of course he is going to be rude, and eyecandy....well i just couldn't resist that! You know me haha.

I'm so happy that you love this though! I really, really am! There's lots more to come when I get it out of my head and onto the page. :)

*munches on coffee and cake whilst dancing!* Thank you! As you know, grammar matters little to me, but I still understood.

loveee Sisi
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[just_being_me08]

*Hides John from the mob* Noooo, not yet guys...he's still needed. Lol, something does always get in the way of our boys, but somehow they always get there in the end... :P

So do I...which is a bit obvious I think from the last scene here. I'm glad you enjoyed it too though! :D

Oh of course...how could I not write proper Towen? I love them too really. No need to smack Owen, well not yet anyway haha.

I shall meet your demands as soon as I can! Feel free to be as greedy as you like, I honestly appreciate it! :D

Btw, your icon is fabulous.... :D:D

[just_being_me08]

Well, being the hopeless fangirl myself, I couldn't stop letting him drop in here, and like you said DEFINITELY someone to drone on alot. As I might have mentioned in other comments, I wanted this doctor to have aspects of all the classic doctors in him ("my boy" inspired by the great william hartnell) and uh oh...I've just realised I'm doing a geeky ramble, sorry about that. :S But yes, the perfect man to advise against meddling with the past... if we do ignore trial of a timelord :P

As for Owen and Tosh, well I guess it could go either way, they have alot to face. Couldn't resist having a slight Tosh/John moment either... but for now all seems to be going swimmingly.

Suggestive practine is textbook John I feel. I'm so pleased you liked that, since it was my favourite section to write. Your very right though, the friendship is going noweher with sex crazed Jack on the loose. Thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment though! It means alot to me :)

[just_being_me08]

Well, being the hopeless fangirl myself, I couldn't stop letting him drop in here, and like you said DEFINITELY someone to drone on alot. As I might have mentioned in other comments, I wanted this doctor to have aspects of all the classic doctors in him ("my boy" inspired by the great william hartnell) and uh oh...I've just realised I'm doing a geeky ramble, sorry about that. :S But yes, the perfect man to advise against meddling with the past... if we do ignore trial of a timelord :P

As for Owen and Tosh, well I guess it could go either way, they have alot to face. Couldn't resist having a slight Tosh/John moment either... but for now all seems to be going swimmingly.

Suggestive practine is textbook John I feel. I'm so pleased you liked that, since it was my favourite section to write. Your very right though, the friendship is going noweher with sex crazed Jack on the loose. Thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment though! It means alot to me :)

[butterflycell]

DUN DUN DUUUUN!

My god, I've just spent all evening catching up with this! I love it to pieces =]

I think you've got John spot on with the possessiveness and I love the way you're writing him. Jack's interactions with him are perfect - the way he's so care free about it and John pretends to do it as well, but it's obvious that there's more than just casual fuck buddies to it... brrr, shivers girl!

I also love how true to Ianto you've kept, you've translated his character really well - loving the mysteriousness of him, can't wait for his past to unfold.

Tosh *thumbs up* Loving Owen, you've got him awesome *thumbs up* THE DOCTOR! YAY! *triple thumbs up* - I really liked the way he just snapped between emotions, perfectly timed, just like in the shows.

Excellent! SO looking forward to more, thankyou so much for posting this!

[just_being_me08]

Goodness me! Thank you so much! This comment honestly made me smile insanely. :D I held your attention that long? I am truly honoured about that lol

I love writing John, because with him you can just say prettu much anything, so I'm really pleased you like reading him just as much. You summed up their relationship perfectly there, Jack is all casual but its clear that John is more attached than that....thank you!

Thanks so much about what you said about Ianto, since getting the characters right is what I'm aiming for here. There's lots more Ianto mysteries to come too, along with more Tosh and Owen, and probably even more erratic doctor.

No problem, thank YOU for reading it all and leaving me such a lovely comment! I hope you enjoy the rest just as much! :D