Second Impressions (2/2)

Apr 06, 2015 13:54


Pairing: KeyHyun
Rating: NC-17
Genre: College!AU, Band!AU, a bit of humour, a bit of angst, more sex and more fluff
Word count: 7919
Summary:( When Jonghyun has an accidental one-night stand with a longtime crush, he isn’t sure what comes next or what to believe. )

pairing: keyhyun, rating: nc-17, type: chaptered, pairing: jongkey, genre: smut, genre: humour, !fanfic

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astridminjichoi April 6 2015, 20:37:36 UTC
spot ;;;;;;;;;; i'll be back after blushing over your fluff

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astridminjichoi May 16 2015, 22:19:36 UTC
(this is an embarrassingly late comment) turns out i'm back a month later. i'm trash otl
but anyways! i can't remember gushing so hard over a fic, like ever. i just needed to tell you ;; will eternally be a perfect fic bc of loser!jjong and flirty kibum omg
Way to sound clingy, Jonghyun chastised himself i feel bad for jjong. he's overanalyzing everything ;;
“You’d think you would have found ways to wind down before a show.” KIBUM THAT'S A GOOD IDEA ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
“I-I think that would make me even more nervous, honestly,” i have no idea how you do it bc i was outright AWWW-ing at a fictional grown man wtf
and hyoyeon is one of my favourite characters in this fic, she is just the embodiment of everything awesome
“I look like a panda,”
“You look hot,” i haven't seen him but 10/10 hyoyeon is right. jonghyun could have his makeup done by a monkey and he would still look hot
“I’m sorry, would you prefer the term groupie?” fucking chortling. i prefer it xD
Jonghyun got started on the snacks, ignoring the pitcher in what he hoped was an ( ... )

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astridminjichoi May 16 2015, 22:19:52 UTC
Jonghyun smiled back, carefully setting the bubble tea on the ground before his arms wound their way around Kibum’s back, steadying himself to deepen their kiss. why is this mental image so cute <3 and the mental image of tehm making out in the doorway for 10 min is even better hehehe
“You mean the time we barely learned each other’s names and had an amazing fuck? No, Jonghyun, I don’t think that qualifies as a date,” i like how kibum puts this though <3 jjong is so stunned lmao, i would have been the same way lol
Of all their dates so far, this, right here, sitting on Kibum’s floor in his tiny, cramped dorm room, sharing take-out with Kibum in sweats beside him, was his favourite. i feel jong on this. i'm a very casual person, and being indoors and alone is the nicest feeling ;; it's so genuine and gahh i got the fuzzies just reading this
“I swear I’m easy to please,” he added in a rush, going for a light tone but as soon as he uttered them, he knew those had been entirely the wrong words to say, AND AGAIN I FEEL BAD FOR JJONG BC ( ... )

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just2wings May 17 2015, 19:54:29 UTC
Believe me I don't care that it's "late" I appreciate it all the same <3333333 thank you so much for coming back and leaving such an awesome comment ;_; you are wonderful. I was smiling the whole time I read it, thank you so much <3
I'm kind of surprised but pleased as hell that you gushed over this fic! I didn't think much of it, I just wanted to write a fic about Jonghyun on and off stage and indulge a bit in his character so I'm glad you liked it so much! And I'm glad you appreciated loser!jjong lmao
Poor Jjond did overanalyze everything in here OTL
Key was just full of good ideas hehe
I just want to say that I'm really happy to hear you liked Hyoyeon in this fic! I really wanted a female character and she kind of fit the rock image and all. I really wanted to make her laid-back but funny and teasing and I'm happy with how she came out so I'm glad you appreciated her!
"jonghyun could have his makeup done by a monkey and he would still look hot" <= amen lol ( ... )

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:25:24 UTC
Aww thank you so much!! I'm really glad you liked this, thank you for reading <333

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sarah_kpopland April 6 2015, 23:26:52 UTC
Love it! Poor Jonghyun feeling pressured to be a "rock star" type (though, who is he kidding?). And to be honest, Key being pretty insecure in the way he interprets the stuff Jonghyun says is pretty cute to. Proves Jonghyun is an absolute dork though uwu

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:27:26 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Poor Jjong indeed, he felt a bit too caught up in first impressions hehe. I'm glad you noticed Key being insecure, because I definitely wanted to show that too -- he too isn't always what he seems ^^
Thank you <3

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anonymous April 6 2015, 23:43:39 UTC
I don't comment nearly enough on your posts but omfggg I love your stuff and this was so worth waiting for part two. ^_^ Keep it up! <3

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:28:21 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked this part ^^

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cuethemusicc April 7 2015, 00:03:44 UTC
omg i didn't even see 1/2 posted but there is 2 parts???????? this is like a gift from my past self for not reading the first part lol

this is a spot btw!! i'm so excited!!!!

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cuethemusicc April 7 2015, 06:51:48 UTC
oh my gosh ( ... )

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:38:59 UTC
Surprise fic lmao \o/
The thing is I tried to go for angsty and it still ended up fluffy OTL so I just gave up. What can I say I want my otp happy.
Poor Jjong xD he had a pretty bad case of foot in mouth syndrome in this fic. I'm really glad you got that part; about Jonghyun feeling inadequate because he thought it was his "rockstar" image that first attracted Key. *claps* Thank you for getting that <3
I wrote that line ("easy to please") kind of mindlessly, because Jonghyun was so clearly kidding in my mind but then I realized how it sounded and kind of cringed to myself but hey it was a good opportunity to showcase Key's insecurities so I went with him and I'm glad that got included \o/ writing mindless dialogue -- not always mindless! lol
I'm glad this could make you chuckle <3 honestly knowing I could make people smile or laugh or chuckle is always such a great feeling ( ... )

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