Second Impressions (2/2)

Apr 06, 2015 13:54


Pairing: KeyHyun
Rating: NC-17
Genre: College!AU, Band!AU, a bit of humour, a bit of angst, more sex and more fluff
Word count: 7919
Summary:( When Jonghyun has an accidental one-night stand with a longtime crush, he isn’t sure what comes next or what to believe. )

pairing: keyhyun, rating: nc-17, type: chaptered, pairing: jongkey, genre: smut, genre: humour, !fanfic

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kpopforlife April 7 2015, 06:12:30 UTC
*flailing around in all the fluff*
your characterizations are always so on point. overly self-conscious '3 drinks and i'm down' baby jong is too cute for words. AND KIBUM with his disney collection and being all embarrassed to have a chill date. sobs.
i love them.
i love this.
i love you.

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:42:10 UTC
fluff \o/
Thank you so much for that! I'm so flattered that you think the characterization was good ;____; that's like one of the best compliments ♥
Key also had his little not-so-secret secrets ^^ I tried to find the pic he had posted a few years ago of his Disney shelf as reference but I couldn't find it. Oh well.
Thank you so much dear, love you too <3

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bianse April 7 2015, 08:57:31 UTC
i might have shrieked when i saw that you updated.

this was a satisfying second half to a satisfying first half. the first half me so giddy because i so thoroughly enjoyed jongkey getting together and their little bumbling morning after. this one made me so anxious and excited because i got so attached to jonghyun and his softy self.

one of the things that i've been really interested in after base promotions, is the differences between jonghyun's on stage and off stage personality. i like how you explored that in this story with jonghyun growing worried over kibum falling for a misconception of him and trying to play along with the charade (poor lightweight jjong).

minho would be everyone's #1 groupie. he'd fight for the moniker even if he grumbles about it ♥

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just2wings April 11 2015, 18:06:56 UTC
Thank you so much I'm glad you thought the second half was okay! I have to admit writing their little awkward-but-not morning after was one of my favourite parts ^^
I really wanted to write a fic about Jonghyun's on vs off-stage self because I feel like he's been revealing more and talking more frankly about it on blue night and all. I don't really think they're 2 distinct personalities, but more like 2 sides of himself so that when he's on stage he pushes himself a little more whereas off-stage he's more reserved. Or something ^^;; anywho I wanted to write a fic about that so here \o/
Minho is already SHINee's groupie I feel lol xD he's so supportive
Thank you for reading and commenting and I'm so glad you liked this <3

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first2leave April 7 2015, 16:25:46 UTC

I love this twoshot man, like damn!

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:42:27 UTC
Thank you so much! <3<3

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kayla13fearless April 7 2015, 18:06:23 UTC
Ah ... ¿Why i love you? because of this.

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:42:50 UTC
<3<3<3 Thank you very much ^^

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yuya_lovah April 7 2015, 20:55:23 UTC
“If he’s a groupie, what does that make me?” he asked, voice low enough so that only Jonghyun could hear.

Jonghyun considered the question for a moment. “Special,” he finally answered.

Oh God, this line made me go all: "Awwww, Jjong is so cheesy and cute and sweet #insertsomethingincoherenthere".
I enjoyed your story, I've always liked your FanFic to be honest and I've read all of them (I left a few comments ♥) and I find your writing style so good and so beautiful, you're able to make me emotional T^T.

I love the way Jonghyun is so shy and insecure around Kibum, he wants to impress 'Bum so he tries to hide is real self ;_; (luckily Kibum is smarter than what Jjong thought *coughs*), I wanted to hug him and tell him to not be afraid fsfregerg.
The hook-up scenes were good and the difference between them was really present, I mean, the meaning between the two scenes were different, the time was different and their feelings were different :P and you made it clear >

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just2wings April 11 2015, 17:50:11 UTC
That last little scene was so cheesy but I couldn't help it xD I blame it on Jonghyun being cheesy lol
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked this and I'm glad you like my fics in general ;~~; thank you.

Poor Jjong had a lot of second thoughts in this fic OTL he just really liked Kibum and wanted to be what he thought Kibum wanted. Yes thankfully Kibum is more perceptive than that xD And I'm really glad you thought there was a difference between the smut scenes, because the underlying meaning is different and the feelings a bit different so yay \o/ I'm glad you thought they were different.

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

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