Gift Fic for yukitsubute

Nov 04, 2012 21:05

Title: Invisible Scars
Pairing/Group: Kame/ Uchi
Rating: PG-13/R
Warnings: Mentions of an abusive relationship, none graphic, and a Johnny’s is not the abuser.
Summary: Uchi needed help getting out of his abusive relationship. Kame was the one to help him, but just leaving an abusive boyfriend doesn’t mean that he’s moved on. Moving on takes longer ( Read more... )

r: pg-13, p: uchi hiroki/kamenashi kazuya, g: crossover

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yukitsubute November 4 2012, 20:11:58 UTC
SPOOOOT

OMG....anon-san, you did a wonder for me here. I read the story in the train on my way to a workshop, and I realy had to try hard not to start crying immediately.

The whole mood and way you put the romance into the sad story is just ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
It's totally how I love romance. And hurt&comfore is just the cherry on the top of the ice cream. :DDDDD

And the chocolate sauce is the pairing. ♥ KameUchi is so rare, and I was totally chipper when I saw it.

Perhaps the scars that are the most ugly are the ones that we cannot see.
Already the first sentence made me cry. It's so true, bruises fade, but the memory stays, and it's the real scar. Poor Uchi, it really must have been hard for him.

“Shhh, I’m not going to tell you that.” Kame methodically cleaned and bandaged his wounds
Kame is so cute, really. I totally love how he acts with Uchi. He doesn't force him to anything, not even to tell him what happened.

Kame is so cool when he calls Uchi's ex-boyfriend. I really hope this guy never calls Uchi again.

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yukitsubute November 5 2012, 17:55:28 UTC
“I was wondering if I could touch them, the scars, I mean.” Uchi’s face darkened and he swallowed.
It starts with Kame doesn't know how to ask Uchi about his scars, and in the end he finally is allowed to touch Uchi.

“They are ugly, aren’t they?” Uchi asked.

“No, they are beautiful because they are a part of you.”

Uchi turned around and saw tears in Kame’s eyes. “I’m so sorry that you had to go through that.” And though Uchi was probably the one that was supposed to be comforted, it was he who held Kame in his arms consoling him.

“It’s okay, because if I hadn’t have gone through that I’d never be with you.”

Uchi is so sweet. No Uchi, the scars aren't ugly. Kame's answer is so great. <3 They really are part of Uchi, and Kame loves the other how he is. <3

I totally loved that small turn you made here. Where Uchi holds Kame in his arms. Even though Uchi is the sad character, it doesn't mean that only he can be the weak one. <3 ( ... )

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lilly0 November 4 2012, 20:16:27 UTC
This was so sad, but also so good. Poor Uchi ><
And the part where Kame got upset was so intense. Poor guys ><
Loved it!!

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