Maybe we're torn apart

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Title: Collision Course (9/13)
Pairing: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Xabi Alonso/Harry Kewell, Steve Finnan/Daniel Agger
Characters: The entire Liverpool squad.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: None of this is real. I don’t own the boys.
A/N: University AU | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8

Comments

[aguardente]

First again? xDD

[aguardente]

Pepe the Buffer Zone *dies* LMAO, this is very Pepe-ish, indeed!

“I’m all for inner beauty, Fernando, but if you gain weight, I’m not going to want to fuck you,” Harry warned seriously. Girl, this chapter is one big quote, seriously, every phrase could be quoted here! Harry is too irresistible for his own good, dammit

[aguardente]

Oh my goodness, it seems like I've written you an essay here. Sorry, I never learnt to shut up on time 8)))
xxx

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Hahaha, you = fierce critic, you scare me. XP

[pendules]

Candy canes! I see no good coming out of this, but I have to admit it's cute. And Harry is just fantastic as always. :P

[jumping_down]

I like brotherly!Stevie and Fernando. :3

[rayziz]

Great!

(Remember, I'm trying to decrease my spamming)

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Pffffft. As if you could. XP

[rayziz]

*Tries so hard*

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See? Spam again. XP

[lust_demolition]

<3

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Thanks. ♥

[pippopippo]

I ADORE what you've done with Stevie and Fernando here. I read some of your comments to other readers in the last entry, and I was afraid you'd hook Stevie and Fernando up while the former was still with and in the dark about Xabi. But the execution of it all is very well done, and now Stevie/Fernando absolutely melt me, even though, I think, I'm still rooting for Dan to make it up big time to Fernando.

Can't wait for the next part.

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I didn't think people actually read other people's comments! Now I'm embarrassed because I splutter off like mad in my replies.

I'm still rooting for Dan too. It'd be fun to see him working his way back. XP

[pippopippo]

Don't be! I skim and read because I often gain insight into the chapter or fic that I'd missed before - it's always interesting to see how others interpret any piece of writing, what stands out for them, etc. I usually go back and re-read after the comments, and it's slightly different the second time around.

[gummiberryjuice]

I totally agree with you, I do that too. I usually write my comment first so I'm not influenced and then go read everyone else's; which is what I'm doing now X