fic for procreational

[spurious]

Title: Messenger Bird's Song
Rating: R
Threesome: Jin/Kame/Yamapi
Summary: Jin leaves, Kame and Yamapi stay behind.
Warnings: none.
Notes: Thanks, as always, to K. procreational, I hope you like this! I may have inadvertently written something you will hate but hopefully that is not the case.

Comments

[asinful]

This was so good. I love the way you wrote all of the boys. I'm so partial to the Pikame here it's not even funny. The Pikame was truly gorgeous - awkward and full of quiet comfort.

Also, this bit right here -

the more Kame relaxes, the more Yamapi likes him, and the more Yamapi likes him, the more Kame relaxes.

So fucking perfect. That's the essence of Pikame right there. A perfect little circle.

I have a sneaking suspicion that I know who you are, Anon-san, but then again I suck at the guessing game. Either way, lovely fic. :)

[spurious]

ahhh I'm so glad the Pikame worked, because I was agonizing over it for so long. ♥ thank youuu.

[procreational]

the more Kame relaxes, the more Yamapi likes him, and the more Yamapi likes him, the more Kame relaxes.
You had my heart at this. Well, actually, you had my heart from when Yamapi stepped onto the elevator, but this is the most perfect description of Yamapi and Kame's relationship that I have ever read.

He gets a reply while he's sitting on the train: How much do you want for the ransom, kidnapper-san?
I adore your Yamapi. I love him so much. This is kind of the epitome of why I love him so much - he re-befriends Kame, takes him out to get drunk, kisses him, sleeps with him FULLY CLOTHED, answers a call from Jin while there, walks out on Kame, and then sends him a text like this. I love your Yamapi so so much.

"If you must," Kame concedes. The backs of their hands brush as they make their way through the crowded streets.
Also? Oh my God, I love your Kame. He is kind of awkward, a little bit confused, but he's still so strong. He's not the Kame usually portrayed in fic, kind of weak and like, a social leper, but your Kame? He is

[anamuan]

i love your flail comments. :DDD even when they're not for me.

[spurious]

uipkdsaf; *flails* this is such a nice comment *_*

I'm so glad Kame came through the way I was trying to write him. I think it's really easy to fall into the temptation of really tragic!Kame (he's so fragile-looking and pretty, he's the perfect angsty hopeless character!) but I was really trying to avoid that and I'm glad it succeeded.

sdlkfj thankyou! ♥

[procreational]

Thank you so much! I love this, it's just so indescribably lovely. *___* I love the dynamics between the three of them, and I absolutely adore your Kame, God, your Kame is fabulous.

♥ I thought the writing style was familiar, but I didn't guess correctly. :X But, again, thank you so, so much!

[gingifere]

Oh god this is
so good. I have such a thing for Kamepi and aksjs this is so perfectly them. I think one of my favourite parts was the bit at Yuu's apartment--I love that Yamapi was sort of flirting with Kame unconsciously and how they're so relaxed. I adore your Kame. He's unsure and awkward but it works and aksj your Yamapi is so perfect too.

I love the way both of them can't help thinking about Jin because it's so realistic. ajnjs and I'm so pleased we got a happy ending because this threesome are just so ridiculously angsty.

I think I know who this is, but either way it's gorgeous <3

[spurious]

:D :D I'm glad you liked it! Did you guess me? lolol I think I am pretty obvious...

[gingifere]

kansjs NO. Lol. I thought this was Ariel actually...aksj awkward. I just reread this. I still love it ♥♥

[spurious]

dead I can see that. Because of the Pikame?

[ky_rin]

the more Kame relaxes, the more Yamapi likes him, and the more Yamapi likes him, the more Kame relaxes.

They more they talk, the more Kame realizes he and Yamapi have a lot in common: not, perhaps, in interests, but in the way they see the world.
slkdjfhslkdfjhslkdjfsldkfjhsdkjfhs guh ♥

How much do you want for the ransom, kidnapper-san?

Yamapi hooks his fingers in the waistband of Kame's jeans, knuckles rubbing against Kame's hipbone.
HOT.

something that makes Jin think this is the right place for him, or as close to the right place as he's going to get.
;______; wonderful closure of sorts for Jin.

This is so awkwardly beautiful. Gorgeous. I loved the Kame/Yamapi and the underlying hurt and angst, before it all comes to a head with Jin and Kame.

[spurious]

♥♥♥♥ glad you liked!

[ayuzak]

Pikame doesn't really work for me usually, but you made it so right and just perfect. They are so adorable together, i was actually a bit disappointed when Jin disrupted the balance a bit, as much as i love Akame, Pikame totally wins in this.
Thank You for this gorgeous fic!

[spurious]

:) I'm glad the Pikame worked for you! Thanks for reading.