fic for procreational

[spurious]

Title: Messenger Bird's Song
Rating: R
Threesome: Jin/Kame/Yamapi
Summary: Jin leaves, Kame and Yamapi stay behind.
Warnings: none.
Notes: Thanks, as always, to K. procreational, I hope you like this! I may have inadvertently written something you will hate but hopefully that is not the case.

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[procreational]

the more Kame relaxes, the more Yamapi likes him, and the more Yamapi likes him, the more Kame relaxes.
You had my heart at this. Well, actually, you had my heart from when Yamapi stepped onto the elevator, but this is the most perfect description of Yamapi and Kame's relationship that I have ever read.

He gets a reply while he's sitting on the train: How much do you want for the ransom, kidnapper-san?
I adore your Yamapi. I love him so much. This is kind of the epitome of why I love him so much - he re-befriends Kame, takes him out to get drunk, kisses him, sleeps with him FULLY CLOTHED, answers a call from Jin while there, walks out on Kame, and then sends him a text like this. I love your Yamapi so so much.

"If you must," Kame concedes. The backs of their hands brush as they make their way through the crowded streets.
Also? Oh my God, I love your Kame. He is kind of awkward, a little bit confused, but he's still so strong. He's not the Kame usually portrayed in fic, kind of weak and like, a social leper, but your Kame? He is glorious. This is the Kame I wish I could write - kind of awkward, yeah, but still with that quiet attitude and personality that make him Kame.

"Maybe today I can walk you home," Kame says.
LOVE YOUR KAME.

Stretched out on Yamapi's bed, with Yamapi's lips slipping down over his cock, Kame wonders fleetingly if this is how Yamapi sucks Jin off.
.........and then, ouch, do you bring the heartache. I literally winced when I read this line. It's beautiful, though, the way you hint at Yamapi and Jin's relationship in all the subtle ways, and Kame flirting and wanting Yamapi, even if he knows about it.

"Oh, I got some," he says, "your mom gave me a few nights to remember."

Jin shrieks and throws a pillow at him, and Yamapi continues, giggling, "she even gave me a discount on the usual rates!"
XDDDD They are such boys. I love this interjection, this little banter. It's adorable and so true - these are the kinds of conversations I hear daily.

Kame, Yamapi thinks, is the one wild card.
Have I mentioned yet how much I love your Yamapi? Your Kame? Your Yamapi and Kame together?

From then on, Jin aggressively doesn't talk about Kame.
My God, is your Jin a brat. *beams* I love him. He's such a bitch, but I love him.

It makes Jin feel trapped, almost, between the two of them, but there's something comforting in it, something that makes Jin think this is the right place for him, or as close to the right place as he's going to get.
Yes. Perfect. Absolutely fucking beautiful.

Anon-san, thank you so so much. I have no idea what you were worried about, because this fic is absolutely perfect. I am so honored that it was written for me. You've managed to incorporate every single thing that I love about the Yamapi/Kame relationship and the Kame/Jin relationship and the Yamapi/Jin relationship into one glorious threesome. I can't wait for reveals. Thank you so, so much.

[anamuan]

i love your flail comments. :DDD even when they're not for me.

[spurious]

uipkdsaf; *flails* this is such a nice comment *_*

I'm so glad Kame came through the way I was trying to write him. I think it's really easy to fall into the temptation of really tragic!Kame (he's so fragile-looking and pretty, he's the perfect angsty hopeless character!) but I was really trying to avoid that and I'm glad it succeeded.

sdlkfj thankyou! ♥

[procreational]

Thank you so much! I love this, it's just so indescribably lovely. *___* I love the dynamics between the three of them, and I absolutely adore your Kame, God, your Kame is fabulous.

♥ I thought the writing style was familiar, but I didn't guess correctly. :X But, again, thank you so, so much!