"Because of You I'm Breaking" [Chapter 13]

[jcapzona]

Title: "Because of You I'm Breaking" [Chapter 13]

Author: JCapzona

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Callie/Arizona

Disclaimer: All television shows and other copyrighted material referred to in this work, and the characters, settings ext. are the properties of their respective owners. This work is non-profit and simply written for fun. Reference to

Comments

[walking_weapon]

YES!!! Take that Nadia!!! So, so, SO glad you went there and let AZ punch Nadia :D Seriously, so happy :D Um...ya write more soon so Callie can be all fine and AZ can choose her.

[jcapzona]

LOL Nadia had it coming with her ridonkulous rant about how it was SOOOOO not her fault.

I don't get it. People love Nadia but want her punched in the face...it's a messed up world we live in. Haha.

Thanks for reading even though the spacings were messed up! My bad. Fixed it now though...even though that's unhelpful to you lol

[ifabi]

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Holy F*ck .... Did that shit just happend?
I'm ummm .... I'm stunned and speechles ,because ,indeed, that was so out of te blue lol

..... When you thought things couldn't get worst .

[jcapzona]

Holy Fck indeed. LOL Yeah I'm sorry, things are more coherent in the next chapter, just had to get the giant violin and face punching out of the way in this one...thanks for reading despite the font/layout messiness. Fixed it now...but yeah =) You're a total trooper for reading through that!

[ifabi]

I love Nadia. But she was asking for that OH! And the violin story ,did her grandma actually died? Was there even a violin in the first place? LOL Seriously the woman is a vamp, a bad ,hot, sexy one but bad [she can bite me if she wants to O.O lol]

[jcapzona]

LOL you say she's a vamp but you'll willingly let her bite you! That's awesome haha.

Would it change anything if the story WAS true?

[seethejoy]

Yay, she got her girl! Even if she is injured... poor Callie :S

The Forgotten Violin & Nadia's story was a cool idea! Kinda random though, what was the inspiration behind that? Does it actually exist?

And Nadia's outfit...I was picturing *the* outfit from when she is sitting on Bette's desk, yes? Delish.
I do feel bad that she got punched and stomped on, but also glad that Callie didn't fall(no pun intended lol) for Nadia's lines :)
Can't wait for the making up...except that Callie is all broken which will make steaminess difficult...oh well, I can deal :P

[jcapzona]

LOL The Forgotten Violin story just had to come up cause I wanted Callie to fall off some sort of infrastructure...no I'm thinking there isn't actually a violin in Seattle...

LOL YES! The vest is totally taken from that! Gotta love her in a vest! LOL Callie is strong!

HAHAHA That's what you care about. Not the broken bones or the broken hearts. But the difficulty that will arise for McSteamy scenes! YES! Freakin' awesome haha.

[mc_maverick]

Wow.....Just. Wow. From "to suture or not to suture" to "the misuse of dimples." I loved it. I'm glad Arizona made it back to Callie. Even though she didn't make it in time to prevent her from falling. She made it back.

I actually read this before going to bed last night, but I was too tired to comment. But I couldn't go to sleep without at least reading it though. Yep. I'm addicted.

[jcapzona]

Awww thanks for making this a bedtime read!! =)

Well the only way Arizona could've prevented the fall was to break her fall...which isn't exactly that awesome of a plot line...plus we need Arizona non-paralyzed to finish the story!

[coliebearz]

AH! SO MUCH WIN! AHHHH!

If you were going for pleasing both Nadia haters and lovers, you did it perfectly. I, of course, kinda had a thing for Nadia...until this chapter. There's just no coming between Callie and Arizona and how much they really do love each other, even when they're apart.

This was excellent. Nadia's so hot (yum, that outfit she was wearing) but I'm still glad she got punched in the face. Funny how that works, huh?

Waiting SUPER impatiently for the next update! Soon soon soon soon? :)

[jcapzona]

LOL I kinda killed Nadia's awesomeness near the end though didn't I? I'm sorry haha. Calzona were freakin' made for each other...just sayin' =)

LOL I LOVE HER black vest look! It's like. THE best business suit ever. it looks..REALLLY goood.

Haha update? Soonish I hope. X)

[coliebearz]

Haha probably not soonish, no. I'm feeling totally insecure about the story right now, so unless i have a burst of inspiration late tonight I won't be publishing for a while...I'll just hide, like you did with this chapter. :P

Your suggestions have helped a lot...I'm just worried of a "why is she still writing about this?!" Reaction. Haha. You know?

Blah. BOYIB is keeping me going. For real.

[jcapzona]

Insecure like size 6 fat jeans =)

LOL I'm hiding too. But just cause I need to catch up with some school work I've procrastinated to an absurd degree with...

Ooooh I see, well, you can always take us back to ARIA <3 never going to complain about herrrrr haha.