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"Because of You I'm Breaking" [Chapter 13]

Mar 29, 2010 23:27

Title: "Because of You I'm Breaking" [Chapter 13]

Author: JCapzona

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Callie/Arizona

Disclaimer: All television shows and other copyrighted material referred to in this work, and the characters, settings ext. are the properties of their respective owners. This work is non-profit and simply written for fun. Reference to ( Read more... )

fanfic, calzona, arizona, greys anatomy, arizona robbins, callie, sara ramirez, grey's anatomy, robbins, callie torres, jessica capshaw

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coliebearz March 30 2010, 17:49:36 UTC

AH! SO MUCH WIN! AHHHH!

If you were going for pleasing both Nadia haters and lovers, you did it perfectly. I, of course, kinda had a thing for Nadia...until this chapter. There's just no coming between Callie and Arizona and how much they really do love each other, even when they're apart.

This was excellent. Nadia's so hot (yum, that outfit she was wearing) but I'm still glad she got punched in the face. Funny how that works, huh?

Waiting SUPER impatiently for the next update! Soon soon soon soon? :)

jcapzona March 30 2010, 23:34:58 UTC

LOL I kinda killed Nadia's awesomeness near the end though didn't I? I'm sorry haha. Calzona were freakin' made for each other...just sayin' =)

LOL I LOVE HER black vest look! It's like. THE best business suit ever. it looks..REALLLY goood.

Haha update? Soonish I hope. X)

coliebearz March 31 2010, 00:33:01 UTC

Haha probably not soonish, no. I'm feeling totally insecure about the story right now, so unless i have a burst of inspiration late tonight I won't be publishing for a while...I'll just hide, like you did with this chapter. :P

Your suggestions have helped a lot...I'm just worried of a "why is she still writing about this?!" Reaction. Haha. You know?

Blah. BOYIB is keeping me going. For real.

jcapzona March 31 2010, 01:14:07 UTC

Insecure like size 6 fat jeans =)

LOL I'm hiding too. But just cause I need to catch up with some school work I've procrastinated to an absurd degree with...

Ooooh I see, well, you can always take us back to ARIA <3 never going to complain about herrrrr haha.

coliebearz March 31 2010, 01:21:41 UTC

Haha grrr :/ those stupid fat jeans!

Aria is exactly my problem. Everyone hates her except for us.

Ditto on the schoolwork. Rahrahahahah!

I'm going to attempt to have part one up tonight.

jcapzona March 31 2010, 02:21:57 UTC

NOoooooo I HEART ARIA!!!! SHee is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
AWESOMEEE!!!!

YESSS!! I will await it. But I defs won't have part 14 up as I have yet to work on my assignments. =( Fml.

coliebearz March 31 2010, 03:10:37 UTC

Haha it seems I spoke too soon. I have to spend tonight writing a paper for my girlfriend...her grades take precedence over the new fic, haha.
But tomorrow for sure!

PS--i forgot to tell you how much I loved az as a crazy driver. I loved that!!! She's so precious. *sigh*.

jcapzona March 31 2010, 07:31:55 UTC

Awww so nice haha. I'm about to break my computer writing up my assignment. DRiving me INSANE. Spent the last four hours doing it because of technical difficulties. FML.

AZ's driving skills are awesome. Just like her =)

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