The last chapter of Storyteller is now up. I am pleased. The story is finished. There may well be other stories within this particular universe in the future, but this one is at an end.
My only real criticism is that some parts of it seem a bit abrupt, but that may be just the start-and-stop way I read it; I shoudl read through the whole thing all in one sitting and see how that affects the flow.
My only real criticism is that some parts of it seem a bit abrupt, but that may be just the start-and-stop way I read it; I shoudl read through the whole thing all in one sitting and see how that affects the flow.
I think this is an entirely valid criticism, actually. My next plan of action is to go through the entire thing and edit it for flow, continuity, and (very occasionally) content. ;)
What're you going to write next? After the editing is done on Storyteller, I was tempted to do some sort of sequel. I had some vague ideas pop up along the way in writing the last chapters of this one, and there's certainly enough room in the universe to make up all sorts of fun. But I'll definitely need some time for brainstorming a continuous plotline first. This one decided to have a more definitive plotline around chapter seven (above and beyond "Look! It's Hook-as-Jack! And he wants Wendy! Weee!") and I think some of the pacing suffered because of it
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My only real criticism is that some parts of it seem a bit abrupt, but that may be just the start-and-stop way I read it; I shoudl read through the whole thing all in one sitting and see how that affects the flow.
What're you going to write next?
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[grin] Thanks!
My only real criticism is that some parts of it seem a bit abrupt, but that may be just the start-and-stop way I read it; I shoudl read through the whole thing all in one sitting and see how that affects the flow.
I think this is an entirely valid criticism, actually. My next plan of action is to go through the entire thing and edit it for flow, continuity, and (very occasionally) content. ;)
What're you going to write next? After the editing is done on Storyteller, I was tempted to do some sort of sequel. I had some vague ideas pop up along the way in writing the last chapters of this one, and there's certainly enough room in the universe to make up all sorts of fun. But I'll definitely need some time for brainstorming a continuous plotline first. This one decided to have a more definitive plotline around chapter seven (above and beyond "Look! It's Hook-as-Jack! And he wants Wendy! Weee!") and I think some of the pacing suffered because of it ( ... )
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