Creative Writing Things

[jalenstrix]

Hurrah! For I have finished enough writing to post chapter 13 of my creative writing thing.

Yes, it's fanfiction. Yes, it's based off the Peter Pan 2003 remake...because it was frickin' awesome. Especially the portrayal of Captain Hook.

Storyteller, Chapter 13

Comments, suggestions, critiques much appreciated.

Comments

[corivax]

I really liked that one; the "fight" was really the epitomy of the Wendy/Jack dynamic. No useful comments, aside from "squee!" :)

[jalenstrix]

Hurrah! Thank you. :) Squees are much appreciated.
I'm particularly glad the "fight" bit worked out - I've been trying to figure a way to work that in for ages. That was the first part of this chapter that actually existed. [grin]

[fallen_tigress]

I posted a review on the chapter... I loved it!! Keep them coming, m'dear.

Leighanne

[jalenstrix]

Heee! Thank you, darlin'.