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jailynn24

Fiction: Shattered Reflection Chapter 15

Mar 14, 2009 13:26

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beccajames March 14 2009, 19:21:49 UTC

I love where you are taking this story! I am so glad Ashlee has worked through some of her Coop issues. Poor Rocky! I can't wait to read what happens. *hug* great job!

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:21:31 UTC

Yeah, Rocky did not catch a break in this chapter. *laughing* He'll just have to work extra hard to make it up to her. Thank you so much for the comment hugs. ***hugs***

anonymous March 14 2009, 19:29:44 UTC

Poor Ashlee. Even though I know nothing actually happened, I'm still a little mad at Rocky *grin*. I know he will eventually redeem himself. Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next. srobinso21

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:23:37 UTC

*laughing* Poor Rocky, he even turned down the booty call and you are mad at him. *grin* He is definitely going to have to work a little harder than he's used to to fix this mess. ***hugs*** Thank you for the comment love, Sheryl!

jyl22075 March 14 2009, 19:36:10 UTC

Just when Ash is ready to test the waters with Rocky. Poor thing... I love this story, Jai. It has just the right amount of angst.

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:24:58 UTC

Thank you, Jenny! **hugs** I'm so happy that you liked the chapter. It was definitely a "one-step-forward, two-steps-back" part for Rocklee. *grin* It's time for Rocky to work.

anonymous March 14 2009, 20:09:12 UTC

It was so nice to see Ashlee hopeful and confident...and even though she is hurt at the moment I know that in the coming chapters she will have reason to hope again! Thanks so much because we all need reason to hope! Hugs! Aus

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:34:23 UTC

It was so nice to write Ashlee like that. *laughing* After so many chapters of a darker Ashlee, I really liked the chance to lighten her up. *grin* Thank you so much for the love and support, Aus. **hugs**

clsicmoviequeen March 14 2009, 20:38:20 UTC

Ever the tease, Jai, haha. Well I will give you this, the chapter definitely kept me on my toes wondering how this would end. I have to say I am loving how head over heels Rocky is with Ashlee. If only we can get the little skank Kendra out of the equation, haha. I want the next chapter soon, but I know I will have to wait till Monday for it. I shall try not to go completely out of mind. Go Rocky!! Go get your Ashlee back!! **hugs**

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:42:30 UTC

Yeah, sorry, but Monday isn't that far away. It will get here before you know it. *la sigh* *laughing* I'm so happy that you were surprised by some of the events that happened in this chapter. That is always such a huge compliment to me, because I don't want you to ever be bored while reading. **hugs** Rocky is a goner, now he has to work. Thank you for the love, Alexica! **hugs**