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Fiction: Shattered Reflection Chapter 15

Mar 14, 2009 13:26

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anonymous March 14 2009, 22:14:29 UTC

I love the fact that Doris is a little kinder in this story, but that she will still do what she must to protect her daughter. I love that Ashlee feels free to love again, but most of all I love that Rocky is so far gone he can't be with anyone else. You are doing such a great job with this story. I really didn't want this chapter to end. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I know things will only get hotter between Rocky and Ashlee. Awesome job!!!!!--BettyB

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:46:35 UTC

I think anyone facing death would be more willing to take stock of what is important. I think that is what Doris is doing in this story and it's what I hope is coming across. *laughing* Rocky is definitely in love with Ashlee and he REALLY is at a complete loss. *grin* I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Thank you so much for your kind words. ***hugs***

eertyecal March 14 2009, 23:00:40 UTC

I love how Doris is taking the time to think about how Ashlee will react to what she says, before she says it. Her illness has definitely reminded her what's most important and has brought her closer to Ashlee. Poor Rocky, he is head over heels for Ashlee and just can't seem to get her. But I know you and I know you'll get them there, eventually. I'm really loving this story and can't wait for the next installment. Enjoy your day off tomorrow. ***hugs*** Tray

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:50:58 UTC

I believe facing what Doris is would make someone more understanding of other people's feelings. Plus I like to believe, had there been actual intelligent writers in the writing room, they would have moved Doris and Ashlee passed the "bad mother/lonely daughter" stage. *laughing* They were starting to last year, but well... *sigh* Poor Rocky is right. The guy turned down a booty call and then got caught with the girl by Ashlee. **hugs him** Thank you for the confidence and the support, Tray. It means everything to me. ***hugs***

anonymous March 15 2009, 03:03:21 UTC

It's good to see that Doris hasn't lost her edge even with her illness. Poor Ashlee. I know that being the brillant writer you are, things will turn around for them both. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Loved it!!!

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:57:49 UTC

Doris still has that protective streak in her when it comes to her baby girl. *grin* I couldn't take that away. Ashlee finally gets ready to take a chance...*grin* Rocky will just have to work extra hard to make things right. Thank you for the comment hug. **hugs**

anonymous March 15 2009, 03:17:46 UTC

Love Ashlee. Love Rocky. Love Doris. No love for Kendra. Keep going Jailynn!!

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:59:19 UTC

*laughing* I'm glad you love so many characters. And I don't love Kendra either. *laughing* She's just angst. Thanks for the comment. **hugs**

angelzqq March 15 2009, 03:34:29 UTC

"Damn it to effing hell" is right, lol Poor Rocky. He doesn't seem to get any more breaks than Coop did, lol C'mon Ash. Jump in with both feet. I'm sure the water's fine *grins*. Great job. Hurry with the next chapter. *hugs*

twinnie

jailynn24 March 15 2009, 14:02:17 UTC

Rocky already seems dangerous to Ashlee and now he gets caught with a girl in his bedroom that he didn't even do anything with. Poor Rocky. *laughing* No luck or lovin' so far for him. That will definitely have to change. Next chapter is Monday. *grin* Thanks for the Twinnie love and hugs. **hugs and love**

~Sissy