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anonymous March 15 2009, 02:49:12 UTC
I'm taking time tonight to catch up on the last couple of chapters. I must say...Wow! I mean that was beautiful. Coop coming to her as a ghost to give his blessings was amazing. It reminded me of Ghost the movie. I'm tearing up even now. Job well done! Can't wait to read the rest.

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jailynn24 March 15 2009, 13:54:50 UTC
Oh, Ghost! That was such a beautiful movie. The only one Demi Moore ever did that I liked. *laughing* I think Coop needed to come back to Ashlee so that she could move on and find closure. That was the main idea behind this chapter. And I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to reply. **hugs**

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maurinak April 10 2009, 14:04:11 UTC
That was a terrific chapter, Jai. You wrote Ashlee's guilt and conflict so well. And a big *HUG* for bringing Coop back to her for some closure. I sure miss him. *sigh* *grin*

Great job, girlie!
~Emm

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jailynn24 April 11 2009, 16:00:36 UTC
Thank you, Emm. I'm so relieved to see that you think I got Ashlee's emotions right. She is going through so much and I didn't want to make it seem flat. **hugs*** Coop had to come back. They have so much that needs to be hashed out. So much needs to be said that never will be on the show. *sigh*

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