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anonymous March 13 2009, 11:55:45 UTC
Awesome chapter once again. I love that you brought Coop back to help guide Ashlee and that he wants her to move on with her life, possibly with Rocky. Loved it, Jai!!!! srobinso21

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jailynn24 March 13 2009, 14:58:32 UTC
*grin* I had to have Ashlee realize that it was okay to fall in love again, even if that person is Rocky. Coop always wanted her to be happy. *sigh* I'm so glad you liked the chapter, Sheryl. ***hugs***

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anonymous March 13 2009, 14:15:44 UTC
Jailynn, you just keep getting better and better and better... I loved this chapter! I really loved this chapter. Bring on the next one. Now you see why I don't write...words just don't come as easily to me as they do to you...

I agree with every other comment left on this page as well.

eversweet35

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jailynn24 March 13 2009, 17:57:40 UTC
Thank you so much. *grin* I'm so happy you liked the way this chapter came out. I know we all miss Coop and most of us hated the way the IIC wrote their end...well they actually didn't write crap for Cooplee, so I hope this was a little bit of closure. **hugs** Thank you again for your kind words.

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jeannem66 March 13 2009, 16:52:33 UTC
Congratulations...another great chapter!
I love that Ashlee got closure with Coop, but also that they are still connected. Now Ashlee and Rocky can get together. Although I think Coop may have to make an appearance to smarten up his twin.(I hope,I hope). Your stories are so much better than what the IIC have come up with. I think you should write your own soap opera.
You can call it GLC(Guiding Light Corrected)and fix all the mistakes those writers have made.

Jeanne Marie

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jailynn24 March 13 2009, 18:21:05 UTC
Aww, *grin* thanks! I really feel like Ashlee needs proper closure for her to move on completely and that never happened on the show. In fact we didn't get anything but crap on the show. *grr* Stupid "writers" (and I use the term writers loosely). I think writing for a soap opera would be a blast. I love getting into character's heads and doing that day in and day out would be a dream, but fixing all that's wrong with GL would take me the rest of my life. *laughing* Thank you again for the comment. **hugs**

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anonymous March 13 2009, 21:51:50 UTC
You totally fixed the whole crap of a death story we got on GL. Your version was beautiful, and even though it would have been so sad to actually see that play out, it would have given Cooplee the closure their story deserved. I love the Coop rubbing his eyebrow with his thumb and I love that you included the picture of her and Coop. That was a great piece of history to add depth to the story. You are an amazing writer. OOPS, have I already said that before? I sometimes repeat myself. lol!--BettyB

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jailynn24 March 14 2009, 13:36:18 UTC
YAY! *happy dance* I'm so, so happy that you liked this chapter, Betty. I think all the Coop/Ashlee fans and Ashlee the character deserve closure. It never came from the idiot that run guiding light and so I tried to give us it here. I wasn't sure I pulled it off, but it thrills me to know you think I did. *grin* Thank you so much for the support and kind words you always give me. I can never express what that means to me. *hugs*

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angelzqq March 14 2009, 02:13:26 UTC
I loved this chapter. The whole thing with Coop was so sweet and just what Ashlee need. Just what we needed too. Great job! *hugs*

twinnie

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jailynn24 March 14 2009, 13:21:46 UTC
I agree. I think we all needed closure that the show in all it's suckdom refused to give us. I'm so happy that you liked the chapter, Twinnie. ***hugs***

~Sissy

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