Transgressions (Epilogue)

[jaceni]

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Italicized: Translated lyrics (at end of chapter) are from Prince Roy’s song “Darte un Beso”. Warning: PWP/SMUT scene for whole chapter. Enjoy. ^_^v

-Epilogue-

Comments

[jaceni]

BB, their mother died in chapter 12. O_O Well, you find out she dies in chapter 12. :) Her and the grandmother in a plane crash. So nothing was holding them back in that country. =D

Awe bb, sorry it ended so soon, but it was actually longer than I first intended it to be and I didn't want to continue it if I saw and ending. ^_^ I'm happy you're glad they ended together and that you thought this situation could somehow happen in real life. Even as far fetched as it was, I'm glad it was realistic enough somehow too. :D

CUII fighting!!! \^o^/

Thank you for commenting so faithfully and reading my fic bb. =D See ya around!!! *sends hugs*

[jaceni]

Lol bb. You're funny. XD

[jaceni]

Alrighty bb. ^_^ Hey, at least you're second, right? :D See ya. ^_^v

[haizul]

I really enjoyed this!! The way you portray their suffering at keeping their feelings from each other.. I think This fic is fine the way it is :) good job!

So Sorry!

[jaceni]

I must have dropped off the face of the earth to not reply back to your comment. T_T

Thanks so much for your praise Haizul!!! I'm glad you enjoyed my fic years ago. XD I appreciated your comment and don't know why I never replied. Better late than never I guess... even if you might not still be around.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^o^/

Lo había olvidado

[lee_ren]

Había olvidado que yo te dejé un comentario, lo que pasa es que hay niños muy precoces que les gusta experimentar cosas de pequeños y como que buscan lo que tienen más a la mano...me pasaron un manga por ahí y me hizo llorar porque el mayor y digamos el seme de la relación terminó todo con el que en este caso era su amigo de infancia, y bueno como te podrás dar cuenta lo que se desarrolle desde la infancia me atrapa

Re: Lo había olvidado

[jaceni]

Muchas gracias! En serio no se porque nunca respondí a estos comentarios. Pero mejor tarde que nunca. Haha, si. Una buena canción y veras todo mas dramático que cuando hay silencio. :) Que bueno que te gusto y me alegro de que hayas dejado comentario.

Gracias por leer. ^o^/

happy and contented

[choclavenderjm]

i think my previous comments were deleted by my cellphone..sorry for the late post here.
first of all, i am happy that the ending for the story is cute,sexy and lovely. i love how you present the last part wherein they still dont know the future ahead of them since being in love with his own brother is really unacceptable by the society. but the love still remains and its so sweet to see them fighting for their love.
secondly, i am contented with how they build their love and presented it in a sweet manner. i haven't really encountered an incest love but because its a jaemin even if its wrong to have a love like that, its okay for the fictional point of view. i hope i didnt confuse you at all.
thirdly, i thank you from the bottom of my heart for the wonderful story you presented to us. i always believe in your writing capabilities. tho thumbs up sensei! keep it up!

Re: happy and contented

[jaceni]

I must have dropped off the face of the earth to not reply back to your comment bb, or maybe LJ did that wipe thing and made it seem I didn't?

Thanks so much for having read and left a comment!!! I'm glad you enjoyed my fic years ago. XD I appreciated your comment and don't know why I never replied. Better late than never I guess.

Thanks for reading and commenting bb! ♥ \^o^/ ♥