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Jun 19, 2004 12:43

I wrote this fic two years ago, but I just re-edited it and as I never posted it here and some of you won't know it, I might as well inflict it on you.

Rain )

fiction, school

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janegaudi June 19 2004, 04:24:47 UTC
whoa

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slashygood June 19 2004, 05:11:42 UTC
That's lovely and painful. The image of the spectrum in particular stood out. <3

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iwouldstay June 19 2004, 06:15:52 UTC
It was the most fascinating lesson I had in thirteen years of school.

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I very much like it yareach June 19 2004, 09:33:13 UTC
I dreamt of kissing you, running my fingers through your hair, tasting you, of seeing your smile and knowing it was for me only.

You must stop making me cry.

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Re: I very much like it iwouldstay June 19 2004, 10:55:45 UTC
I don't mean to. It's just that I feel more comfortable writing sad stories.

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chains_of_irony June 20 2004, 07:02:41 UTC
Wow. Is this based on RL, it sounds inspired.

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iwouldstay June 20 2004, 08:22:44 UTC
Let's say it's inspired by real life.

The girl exists, but she has a different name and when I last heard of her, she was well alive.

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potterwitch June 24 2004, 06:01:48 UTC
Oh wow. The little details! The smiles, and the spectrum... very beautiful, very sad. I really like the way you write, this sort of slow, thoughtful way, where everything seems very important and you really pay attention. Lovely!

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iwouldstay June 25 2004, 12:38:56 UTC
Thank you. I'm quite flattered by all this praise...

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