Game-Play Ponderings

Apr 05, 2008 01:08

*sighs and rubs head* I swear, sometimes I don't understand how my mind works sometimes ( Read more... )

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From Shey~ anonymous April 21 2008, 06:08:22 UTC
Sorry, no input at the moment... It's really early in the morning, I'm scheming evil against Kaze, and I should be asleep. And the week after graduation isn't always as simple as it should be. Anyway! Happy belated birthday. >.> I missed it, but that's what happens with graduations and then not checking e-mail messages in forever. So~! Happy Birthday. And I'll make some comments on what you wrote when I have time tomorrow (after satisfying my mother on the "career search" *shudder* It isn't "job search" anymore!)

Oh yeah! I need to get the comments to you for your other thing you had me read~ Mweeeeh! O_o *not using own computer*

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Re: Shey's Input Part 2 nakanaide_stray April 22 2008, 06:54:44 UTC
Whoops. >.> Thought I could edit the comment, but I can't. And this will need to be split into a couple replies. O_O ( ... )

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Re: Shey's Input Part 2 nakanaide_stray April 22 2008, 06:55:26 UTC
10. You used a phrase a couple times that really made me want to twitch: "On a sigh." It was awkward to read ( ... )

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I heart English majors~ ishou_akai_kou April 22 2008, 07:16:37 UTC
XD believe me Shey, those two posts are /more/ than I've ever gotten from any of my friends/family/classmates that have read my stuff.

Tis why I trust your opinions when it comes to writing!

I have already started working in some of your suggestions into a revision. Dunno if I'll post it on my LJ again, but I can certainly send you the file when I'm done with it.

Just keep in mind that this story has no beginning and I don't know if I'll ever flesh it out more than this, so don't look for any major character/plot developments from this... (and dangit, ellipses are part of my typing vocabulary, it's gonna be a hard habit to kick)

I would love to see your notes and such on that other really crappy story beginning I sent you~ I've been working on it some, but finals and laziness have hindered any more writing out of me. ^^;;

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