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OHSHC: Host Princess

Mar 30, 2007 17:45

Host Princess
by SmartOotori (if she's so smart, how does she manage to make a mistake like writing this 'fic?)
a new girl just showed up in Ouran without her parents so, she has to stay with a host family until Christmas. the Host Club meets her and....well, read the story. I suck at summaries. OCxKyouya
I hate it when authors say that. If you suck ( Read more... )

Comments 4

The Writer: SmartOotori anonymous May 14 2009, 07:02:30 UTC

First of all: Thank you for criticizing my work but, you only read one chapter so WHAT'S THE POINT OF IT ( ... )

Re: The Writer: SmartOotori ioed May 14 2009, 17:26:05 UTC

I'm glad you're improving your writing. It's always good to look back on old things, and try to rework them, or just keep them on file for reference, so you know how far you've come since then ( ... )

Re: The Writer: SmartOotori anonymous May 15 2009, 07:03:48 UTC

Yea, thanks for that. I dunno, maybe it's because that maybe the first harsh review I got but again, I cling to criticism like static, I always want to improve my work ( ... )

Continuing.... anonymous May 14 2009, 07:07:19 UTC

Sorry about the typo in the end....

And if you ever feel like you want to scream at me, PM me in fanfiction. Just go to my account.

Don't feel like giving you my email.