OHSHC: Host Princess

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Host Princess
by SmartOotori (if she's so smart, how does she manage to make a mistake like writing this 'fic?)
a new girl just showed up in Ouran without her parents so, she has to stay with a host family until Christmas. the Host Club meets her and....well, read the story. I suck at summaries. OCxKyouya
I hate it when authors say that. If you suck

Comments

Re: The Writer: SmartOotori

[anonymous]

Yea, thanks for that. I dunno, maybe it's because that maybe the first harsh review I got but again, I cling to criticism like static, I always want to improve my work.

I've improved, I think. When I read my past stuff, I was like "Wow..." You know how some stories are like, spacing their sayings like:

"I like how you did......."

"Oh yea, thanks!"

When I read things like that, it felt like, the expressions on their faces are missing from my imagination, like it's just a black hole.

Nah, I try library but it's just that, well, it's too quiet? I do stories with music and somehow, music became my inspiration in many of my stories.

Are you trying to be like an editor???? Haha, I have a feeling because of the review. ^^

Again, thanks for doing that. Although I got hurt, I still appreciated that I know where I need to improve. I knew I was using cliche-d words like "amber pools". I try to let go of that but I still can't find ways to do that....maybe some help?

And the critique....hm, maybe when I'm done with my contest paper...'cause sometimes my teacher changes all the CORRECT stuff I made into MISTAKES. My grammar was correct but she changed it...it sounded SO weird when I read again....and I got a bad grade for it....UGH.

Thanks! Maybe we could be friends ^^
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