I don’t particularly like…the beginning of this and how Heechul explains the case, but and so um yea :/ This is probably one of the longer chapters without having the largest word count as well, but all the information is needed or I wouldn’t have stuck it all in here.
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I like that Junsu had a knack for computers, it's amazingly suit him, not to mention blowing thing up too^ ^
and I feel really sad for poor kyu and what he had to suffer :(
mmmm... I wonder if wookie gonna be kyu doctor, anyway you're really amazing ^ ^ can't wait for the next one
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8DDD You make me feel super super proud, and sad that I haven't gotten to start the writing of chapter 8 yet ._. I WILL TONIGHT! No school this Monday 8D
Definitely coincidental ;D Soon my dear, soon you shall have your answers <3
LOL <3 Yes, Kyuhyun didn't jump in front of his mother in time to stop the bullet, but he did manage to make it there in time to get covered in her blood, which, by the way, I would be traumatized from that as well ._. 8D Why yes, that might just be his mother ^^
Lol thanks, I'm glad you didn't think it was so bad in the beginning <3 But 8D Again, I get to be super proud of having kept your eyes stuck to the screen /is giddy This was one of my favorite chapters to write actually lol.
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I love Henry as the computer prodigy. :D I can tell this story is going to be very good, complete with some angst and midnfuck on poor Kyuhyun's part, but that makes everything more itneresting, right?
Poor Kyuhyunnie, guilt from leaving his parents and sister behind would be enough to drive him insane without all the rest of his mental trauma. The scenes from the mental hospital are going to be fun, especially if parts are written from Kyuhyun's distorted point of view, though I don't think he's quite as insane as SM would like us all to believe.
I look forward to the next chapter. I shall stalk it.
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I like these speculations about Ryeowook, because I didn't actually expect anyone to think about him until he came up in the fic, but ;D I guess we'll just have to see if you're right about your speculations though, won't we?
XDD From the minute I started writing this fic about a yer ago and yes I've been working on the development of this for that long and it's still not actually completely complete I couldn't get rid of the idea as Henry as the Computer Prodigy, seriously.
Thank you for reading and commenting! <3
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