The Shadow Kissed Chapter Two

[insanityplays]

I don’t particularly like…the beginning of this and how Heechul explains the case, but and so um yea :/ This is probably one of the longer chapters without having the largest word count as well, but all the information is needed or I wouldn’t have stuck it all in here.

New Characters revealed.

THIS STORY IS ABANDONED AND WILL NOT BE COMPLETED.

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[stripysockz]

SO HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT YOU'RE AMAZING?

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That was just... /dies

Seriously, this is already one of my favourite fics at the moment. And like, normally angst isn't even my thing, but YOU WRITE SO BRILLIANTLY IDEK ILU

*calming breaths*

OKAY. So the question is, why is Yesung having these dreams?! How on earth is he able to see inside Kyuhyun's head, into his memories?? And then he just so happens to be assigned to the case that will, I'm guessing, also bring him into contact with Kyuhyun. Uh huh, this is verrry coincidental...

So then did Kyu's mother get hit by the bullet anyway, even though he tried to jump in front of it? Because up till now I've been trying to figure out how he didn't die, lol. And wow, kudos to him for escaping the madmen, though I can't blame him for going a bit insane. OHHHH and was that the ghost of his mother at the end of the dream there?

I don't really think there's any way you could possibly improve the first part of this - like, we need to know all that stuff and there's no way you could make it more interesting, I think it works just fine! But then the second half or so is just incredible - the news bulletins get across the horror even though they're more detatched, and then the nightmare was so vivid and fast-paced, I swear my eyes were literally glued to the screen. You write action SO well!!!! And the way you managed to make it quite poetic as well as intense was amazing. I am seriously in love with your writing style!

Yesung feeling like he knows Kyuhyun...

HE WILL SOON! KRY <333

So to summarise: you are good job! *stalks*

[insanityplays]

SO I HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I MISS YOU D; <3

8DDD You make me feel super super proud, and sad that I haven't gotten to start the writing of chapter 8 yet ._. I WILL TONIGHT! No school this Monday 8D

Definitely coincidental ;D Soon my dear, soon you shall have your answers <3

LOL <3 Yes, Kyuhyun didn't jump in front of his mother in time to stop the bullet, but he did manage to make it there in time to get covered in her blood, which, by the way, I would be traumatized from that as well ._. 8D Why yes, that might just be his mother ^^

Lol thanks, I'm glad you didn't think it was so bad in the beginning <3 But 8D Again, I get to be super proud of having kept your eyes stuck to the screen /is giddy This was one of my favorite chapters to write actually lol.

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