The Shadow Kissed Chapter One

[insanityplays]

So this chapter is mostly just introductions and the set up of the whole story, but we kind of have to have this chapter don’t we? Also, Tuesday’s are odd days…so updates will be Sundays. Unless I get weird and start being sporadic and give you something extra…which probably won’t happen until the whole thing is finished, which you should be happy

Comments

[ink_river10]

WOW, darlin. Just wow! This is so well written and so descriptive, I had no problem envisioning the entire thing. And I LOVE that you made Heechul the chief. :D

Cop!Yesung is HAWT. I can't wait for the next part!

[insanityplays]

Rofl <3 Heechul had to be the chief. There could be no one else XDD and UMF. Can't you just imagine Yesung?

[kyusung_addict]

Wow I gotta say this is really amazing, can't wait for more ^ ^

[insanityplays]

Thank you! <3

[rayneweather]

You did a great job with the first chapter introducing characters and explaining the relationships between them. I love the idea of Kangin as a tough as nails street cop. His relationship with Yesung is spot on - playing around with him but his trusted ally when needed. Heechul as chief, that's great!!! I'd love to see Hae working in the CSI lab; makes me think of EHB when they all were wearing lab coats. Ugh, a children's psych facility where they're not getting proper treatment pisses me off!!! GO TAKE DOWN SME!!!! Sorry, nurse mode took over for a second. Siwon being undercover in a psych ward gives me the giggles, that's a sight I'd love to see. His acting is pretty good, I'm sure he can pull it off. I can't wait to see what (and who) awaits Yesung once he gets there.

[insanityplays]

8D Thank you! I was a little unsure about the opening of this in all honesty, since it was a little less conventional the way I introduced everyone but I'm glad it works out well.

I was trying to find a picture from EHB that would work really well for Donghae's picture in the character chart but I couldn't...but LOL we had the same thing in mind there.

And yea, children's psych facility where they don't get care pisses me off as well. I'm looking into maybe being a CNA so~ Lol but 8D Nurse's FTW

;D We'll see.

[stripysockz]

*bounces* I love this! Big AUs with lots of minor recognisable background characters tend to make me go all squealy, this one is no exception! Amber as a police woman, can totally see it! And Yunjae partners, definitely approve

[insanityplays]

xDD Big Au's are fuuuun~ and addicting ._. but lol <3

I attempted to start it off with Heechul just giving him the assignment, but it felt off. I knew there was something wrong, so I thought, why not introduce some of his real life happenings before all the shit goes down? So 8D I'm glad it worked out well and LOLOL Thank you bb ^^

I seriously love kangsung ._. and XDD That's how I actually decided that Kangin would be a drug buster ;D

I know right? I was thinking about that when I came up with the whole idea O_O

;D Someone's on the road of unraveling secrets~ I was wondering if anyone would notice that tiny detail.

ROFL I LOVE YOU

[stripysockz]

Well I really like the way you've written it here, it works really well :D

Oohh yay! Theorising is fun, glad I got that right XD

LOL <333

[lady_hanaka]

I am so glad I stumbled upon this story. :D I love crime-centered ones. And when there's KRY and HanChul and KangTeuk, that just makes everything better.

Hehehehe, SM Inudustries. Yeah, take that Lee Soo Man. We all knew you were evil.

[insanityplays]

ROFL SMI and Lee Soo Man just made it so easy to make them the bad guys ;D And 8D Thank you!