The Shadow Kissed Chapter One

[insanityplays]

So this chapter is mostly just introductions and the set up of the whole story, but we kind of have to have this chapter don’t we? Also, Tuesday’s are odd days…so updates will be Sundays. Unless I get weird and start being sporadic and give you something extra…which probably won’t happen until the whole thing is finished, which you should be happy

Comments

[stripysockz]

*bounces* I love this! Big AUs with lots of minor recognisable background characters tend to make me go all squealy, this one is no exception! Amber as a police woman, can totally see it! And Yunjae partners, definitely approve!

I like the way you started this fic off, even if it's not that conventional. A lot of people would maybe have started with Yesung getting back to headquarters, and have gone straight into Heechul giving him the mission, but you've let us see what he was doing before that. We get to see what his life is like on a daily basis, we get to see what Kyuwook will be interrupting, and you've also been able to introduce several of the characters quite subtly. Not to mention we get to see Cop!Yesung in action and taking out the bad guys! It was kind of like the big opening scene in some kind of heist movie actually, you write so vividly!

Kangsung friendship! I'm really starting to like them more and more these days, and sort-of-ninja Kangteuk too! YAY! Oh, and I totally loved the way you used the meaning of Kangin's stage name to make him a more convincing drug buster (not that it's hard to imagine, lol) :D

SM as the bad guys, I approve so much! I BET they're doing illegal stuff. Like, in real life. Which is worrying =/

Very chilling last few paragraphs, this is serious stuff. I'm wondering how Kyuhyun ended up there, and what they're doing to him, and most importantly, why Yesung was dreaming about him! I mean, Ryeowook's the psychic one in this fic... very strange.

Oh! And I bet that's how they got the anonymous tip-off, non?

But seriously. I LOVE THIS AND WILL BE STALKING IT OKAY? XD

[insanityplays]

xDD Big Au's are fuuuun~ and addicting ._. but lol <3

I attempted to start it off with Heechul just giving him the assignment, but it felt off. I knew there was something wrong, so I thought, why not introduce some of his real life happenings before all the shit goes down? So 8D I'm glad it worked out well and LOLOL Thank you bb ^^

I seriously love kangsung ._. and XDD That's how I actually decided that Kangin would be a drug buster ;D

I know right? I was thinking about that when I came up with the whole idea O_O

;D Someone's on the road of unraveling secrets~ I was wondering if anyone would notice that tiny detail.

ROFL I LOVE YOU

[stripysockz]

Well I really like the way you've written it here, it works really well :D

Oohh yay! Theorising is fun, glad I got that right XD

LOL <333