Fic: Puzzling Evidence (Part XX), NC-17, Lorne/Zelenka by inkscribe

Jan 08, 2007 10:11

Title: Puzzling Evidence (Part XX)
Author: inkscribe
Pairings: Lorne/Zelenka
Kink: mild D/s, bondage, spanking
Warnings: This story has angst. Really! See angst-o-meter for chapter rating.
Angst-o-meter: kilo-angst (strong)
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~2700 (this part)
Spoilers: none(this part)
Locations: atlantiskink, welovezelenka, slashing_lorne, my LJ
Feedback: yes, please!

Summary: What we see ( Read more... )

dex, mckay, angst, sga, zelenka, beckett, kink, d/s, puzzling evidence, weir, lorne, bdsm

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inkscribe January 8 2007, 19:44:48 UTC
LOL! Skipped a chapter here n' there, eh? ;-)

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inkscribe January 8 2007, 20:06:27 UTC
No worries -- it's rather long, lol! At a guess, it looks like you missed something between chapters 10-13. :-)

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miso_no_tsuki January 8 2007, 21:16:20 UTC
Oh dear, Rodney really hasn't learnt anything has he? Off with the pixies again. I don't know about spanking and bondage, but Liz needs to slap some sense into her senior staff, ne?
And Rodney needs a close encounter with a proctoscope.Preferably with the cam hooked to the City intranet so everyone can see exactly where his head is...
(Thank you for providing another ep so quickly.This is now novel length, many congrats for passing the magic 50K *claps*)

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inkscribe January 8 2007, 22:44:32 UTC
Ano! We need Dom!Liz to reveal herself. Heh heh heh. :-D

Eeep! -- a proctoscope? Now, funny how I hadn't thought of that at all. Hmmm ... where to work into the plot. ;-)

And thank you for the novel-length recognition! My first one! :-) Woo hoo! thank you, thank you, thankyouverymuch

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audreyscastle January 9 2007, 02:05:11 UTC

Dom!Liz....hee.....oh, it could be a little BDSM party....

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inkscribe January 9 2007, 03:51:03 UTC
Well, if she ends up going that way, I'll have to insist she wear's the costume she sports in your userpic, LOL!

I have this feeling that if she were to dress like that and someone said "Dude!" within earshot, she wouldn't hesistate to smack 'em. ;-)

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pushkin666 January 8 2007, 22:37:33 UTC
I thought the bit between Rodney and Ronon was quite funny *g* It's also nice to see Carson beginning to interact with people again.

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inkscribe January 8 2007, 22:48:32 UTC
Thanks! I was aiming for some funny. We'll have a lot of not-funny again in awhile, so ... well, sometimes I can try for kindness before the pain. ;-)

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pushkin666 January 8 2007, 22:49:26 UTC
kindness before the pain. Oh dear.....

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inkscribe January 8 2007, 22:52:26 UTC
Oops! Was that too toppy of me? *blush*

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elmyraemilie January 8 2007, 23:43:00 UTC
What a treat! I wasn't expecting an update today! How was work?

Rodney, dammit, when I praised you for thinking, I didn't mean you were supposed to go wandering off, dragging Ronon into trouble with you. CSI! Hehehe. All my favorite fandoms. You get me some Snape in here and you'll have hit most of them.

Carson is like most of us--there's a face that works for him, and when he's using that face (the doctor-face) he can be strong. When it slips, then he feels weak. At least now he can appreciate that people care about him and aren't judging him for his weakness, but empathizing instead.

Another wonderful chapter. I'm just glad that Zelenka has come out of his fugue. But what was it that put him under?

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inkscribe January 9 2007, 03:55:23 UTC
Hee -- well, we've just learned there is some wolf-connection thingie with Chuck (according to David Nykl's blog), so we might be able to manage Remus, but Snape? I dunno.

Funny you should ask about Radek's fugue. Once I finish swotting up on neuroscience, I'll let you all know. ;-)

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starrylizard January 9 2007, 00:58:11 UTC
Cool, still updating even with work.

Glad to see Carson getting back to himself. I can't help thinking that Radek is somehow doing what he used to do at some time in his shady past. Abused kids can block out sections of time like that, can't they?

*waits for more*

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inkscribe January 9 2007, 03:57:45 UTC
Hmmm ... no comment. ;-) We'll get there in the next chapter, though, so we'll know more then. Or not. Because sometimes this fic takes its own sweet time to unfold.

It's doubtful I can have another one ready for tomorrow, but I have a good start on it so maybepossiblyperhaps there will be another the day after. *keepsfingerscrossed*

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