Fic: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXXII), NC-17, Lorne/Zelenka by inkscribe

Apr 15, 2007 22:28

Title: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXXII)
Author: inkscribe
Pairings: Lorne/Zelenka
Kink: mild D/s, bondage, spanking
Warnings: none
Promises: No pre-Sunday canon characters are permanently harmed in the making of this fic. EVER.
Angst-o-meter: giga-angst (very strong)

Rating: NC-17
Words: ~3300 (this part)
Spoilers: none (this part)
Locations: atlantiskink, welovezelenka, slashing_lorne, sgaauwtptbdfu, notmcshep, my ( Read more... )

mckay, angst, au, sga, sheppard, zelenka, beckett, kink, d/s, slash, puzzling evidence, keras, weir, lorne

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dark_cygnet April 16 2007, 05:59:24 UTC
DUDE! *waits anxiously for the next part*

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inkscribe April 16 2007, 13:10:08 UTC
Heh. DUDE -- thanks to so, so many reasons, the next two chapters are actually plotted entire! They just have to get written. *evil grin*

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desala April 16 2007, 06:24:26 UTC
Poor woobies! *whimpers* Such suspense and angst you put with them! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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inkscribe April 16 2007, 13:12:13 UTC
*whimpers with you*

Ironically, given the far darker material I've been working with the last while, I had to ask for help to set the Angst-O-Meter rating for this chapter. This chapter is light-n-fluffy from my current POV, relatively speaking. ;-)

No ETA for the next chapter(s) [sorry] but they are plotted -- yay!

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fishbaum April 16 2007, 07:36:48 UTC
I'll admit, I had wondered if this story had fallen by the wayside. I'm glad it hasn't! And I hope real life eases up for you, too. {hugs}

I went back and re-read the last 5 chapters, to get me back in the mood, and I'm liking Keras more and more. :) I'm completely confused plot-wise, but I'm not at all a mystery fan, so I'm used to having plot clue go right over my head. :) Glad to see Hermiod on our guys' side!

I hope to see more of this, and I hope life gets better for you, too.

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inkscribe April 16 2007, 13:17:40 UTC
Short of suddenly shedding my mortal coil, I am fully committed to completing this story.

Thank you for the hugs. I can SO use them these days. *headdesk*

I've never read mysteries, so I'm not sure how this story compares to that genre. I just know that I personally enjoy twisty plots, and I prefer stories where events and actions have meaning more often than not. Otherwise, it's just bumpf to get the wordcount up. ;-)

My theory is that Hermiod and Rodney became more 'buddy-ish' offscreen in S3, Tao of Rodney, after sharing some math. *g* I won't explain more just to avoid spoilery bits for those who haven't seen the ep (anyone who has seen the ep should know what line I'm referring to *g*).

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Puzzling Evidence XXXII slashpuppy April 16 2007, 08:22:40 UTC
Glad RL seems to have improved. Hope it keeps doing so!

Thanks for putting out another chapter of PE. It's funny, you often don't realise how much you are missing something until you see it again. And I've *missed* not having regular updates of PE cos it's such a *good* story!

That aside, you *evil* woman. What a chapter! Marc and Carson are still trapped and now John's having a crisis of confidence? Glad to see that Radek was reassured by Rodney's usual ranting and railing. :-)

I *want want want* to know what's gonna happen next. *whine mode on* Pleaseeeeee? Pretty please? Pretty please with sugar on top? *hops from foot to foot in anticipation*

Wee fix:
'He looked searched' ... remove the word 'looked'?

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Re: Puzzling Evidence XXXII inkscribe April 16 2007, 13:08:39 UTC
*blushes* Whoops! Thank you for catching that! Fixed.

Hmmm ... I realise I may have left a mis-impression in my AN. RL has not improved, not even close. I am hoping it has bottomed out and really can't get any worse at this point. *fingers crossed* However, regardless of RL, I very much wanted to get more of this story written, because I really enjoy it, too. :-)

As for your whining, well, have I not promised that no one dies? Given that humans can only survive a limited time with absolutely no water, that should imply we can see our two boys rescued in the near future, ne? *g*

Thanks for continuing to read and enjoy! :-D

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Re: Puzzling Evidence XXXII slashpuppy December 15 2007, 01:50:04 UTC
Ok, time to start my annual/bi-annual begging for this story to be continued/finished. I really love what was happening here and I would love to read more.

Please, please, please, wrtie more on this soon!

:-)

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Re: Puzzling Evidence XXXII inkscribe January 22 2008, 06:24:20 UTC
Okay, more written. Posting soonish tonight, if I can get all my coding to work. :-)

Thank you for your incredible patience with this story.

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ankhmutes April 16 2007, 11:51:37 UTC
YAY! A new chapter! I love this fic! Tell me that they save Carson and Marc, and that brings Radek and Rodney back to their friendship?? No, don't tell me. Just write the next chapter. (After you write that Radek fic. And the next bit of "your reward"... and... well, you get the idea. Just don't stop writing!)

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inkscribe April 16 2007, 13:19:54 UTC
*points to promise, above* Really, I'm not kidding! No pre-Sunday characters are permanently harmed in the making of this fic! Which means, by extension, that Carson and Marc must be saved to reach that happy ending! Really! *g*

(Yeah, I supposed I'd best put some attention to that Radek fic given the deadline rushes forward, lol.)

Thank you for continuing to read!

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