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Supernatural: Cradlesong [Part 3/3]

Nov 21, 2010 21:45

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( The world can be so cruel, but I will sing for you this cradle song, all night long. )

supernatural, cradlesong!verse, cradlesong

Comments 68

cackling_madly November 23 2010, 08:52:24 UTC

I honestly don't think I have words for how awesome this is. First of all, it's so steeped in canon and spans every season and it's epic! I love how you managed that, focusing on specific events, making them your own and making Jess such an integral part of Sam and Dean's lives. You really nailed the balance between canon and your own verse.

And Jess is so wonderfully badass and feisty and loving and the perfect girl for Sam and Dean. But she's not perfect, she's human: she fucks up and second-guesses herself and makes questionable decisions - and I love that about her, too.

As for the porn, it was hot (incredibly fucking hot), it was abundant (like you promised warned it would be), but cherie, PORN ISN'T SUPPOSED TO MAKE YOU CRY (which is exactly what happened when I read the scene after Dean went to hell). That was some very emotional, heartbreaking porn. Really lovely emotional porn ( ... )

cherie_morte November 23 2010, 15:56:54 UTC

CACKLES. DAMMIT. FINISH YOUR WRITING BEFORE YOU READ MY PORN, WOMAN. *whip whip whip*

You really nailed the balance between canon and your own verse.Oh! Thank you so much, BB! It took so much time and planning and rewatching and note taking to nail this stuff down, so hearing that it all paid off is a big relief ( ... )

loveisimmortal November 23 2010, 14:43:39 UTC

I read this last and couldn't think of proper feedback and I still can't. The ending had me in tears, I mean omg I wish supernatural was on hbo so it could be this. So goooodd.

cherie_morte November 23 2010, 15:40:15 UTC

I'm flattered that it was able to affect you like that! Thank you so much for reading!

timeless_day November 23 2010, 17:28:03 UTC

I’ve been reading Supernatural fanfic for a year without commenting because I’m very uncomfortable with my English, but… I have to say how much I loved all this.
Your Jess was beautiful - one of the best female characters I ever read - and her relationship with Sam and Dean so *perfect*. Complex but balanced and… Almost unavoidable.
And I don’t think there are many stories where the brothers’ love is more realistic and evident.
Thank you.^^

cherie_morte November 23 2010, 17:57:23 UTC

:D I am so happy that you chose to comment! This comment made me smile!

I am so thrilled that you liked the way I wrote Jess, and that you found her relationship with the boys believable.

Thank YOU so much for reading and for letting me know what you thought! And you shouldn't by shy about your English, it's excellent :)

elisera November 24 2010, 20:42:12 UTC

Oh, god.

I cried so much. For Dean and Sam but also for Jess who is left helpless in so many instances, loving her men but unable to make it better for them outside of catching them when they come to her, broken into pieces.

I haven't watched anything of season six (I have it saved, I just can't stomach it on top of all the drama in my life) so I am only slightly spoiled for it, but I am aching for these three in your 'verse and were the future will take them.

THANK YOU for creating such a vivid universe.

On the other hand, despite the pain and the horror that lays in wait for the Winchesters, I'm in love with this 'verse because here they both have Jess and the baby.

cherie_morte November 24 2010, 20:48:29 UTC

I did put them in a crappy place, didn't I? But, like you, I like to think there is a happy ending down the road for these guys. If anything, that kid is going to be loved like crazy :)

Thank YOU for taking the time to read it and letting me know what you thought! It means a lot that you enjoyed it ♥

lightthesparks November 25 2010, 20:47:52 UTC

.... and then Sam came back from hell and they all fucked like bunnies and everyone lived happily ever after.

P.S. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS.

cherie_morte November 25 2010, 20:49:33 UTC

YAY HAPPY ENDING. \o/ That's pretty how it happens anyway.

COINCIDENTALLY, I AM JUST NOW WRITING A COMMENT ON YOUR SAM/DEAN/JESS ART. LOOK AT US, WE HAVE A THEME.

ALSO, I OWE YOU LIKE 7 ORGASMS BECAUSE NGGGGHHH.

lightthesparks November 25 2010, 21:30:17 UTC

Indeed, we do have a theme! It's called FUCKING HOT. :D

Also, I totally intend to collect, just so you know. Heh.