Comments | inevitabilityy: 08; [fic] pieces of the sun (pin; 1/1)

inevitabilityy

08; [fic] pieces of the sun (pin; 1/1)

Oct 15, 2007 01:45

Result of two nights' obsessive typing:

( I wanted to walk on the sun, Jin confesses, until I was eight and someone told me I'd burn up if I did. )

fic: je, i owe a lot of fic, pin, fic

Comments 64

fishings October 15 2007, 07:47:42 UTC

Lovely fic! I really felt bad for Jin every time he held himself back. I'm glad he managed to convey how he felt to Pi in the end. (:

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 22:06:46 UTC

Thank you! ♥ I was debating until the very last moment whether to make it complete angst or something.

jadedfrenzy October 15 2007, 08:16:06 UTC

Beautiful! This literally undid me. It's perfect, all angst and love and breathless whispers.

Jin is perfect in his awkwardness, a child still in so many ways, and I seriously wanted to scoop him up and cuddle him until it was all better throughout the entire fic.

Thank you for sharing!

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 22:07:44 UTC

asjgkhsf -honored

This really made my day, ahh, thank you so much! ♥

nikonikoneko October 15 2007, 08:41:45 UTC

aw~~~, so sweet, sweet, sweet! <3
thanks for writing this wonderful fic^^.

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 22:08:19 UTC

ee I like your icon! Shige. *___*

Thank you for reading.

nikonikoneko October 16 2007, 07:30:04 UTC

the icon? oh, i'm not a great shige fan, but i really like this icon - perhaps i'm the only one, who interprets the apple as "sin" XDDD

musikologie October 15 2007, 09:41:36 UTC

WHY IS THIS SO AMAZING. *FLAILS*

I LOVE IT. I LOVE JIN AND I LOVE YAMAPI AND OH GOD RYO AND YUU CAMEOS IN PIN FICS MAKE MY LIFE.

SO GOOD. <33333333333

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 22:09:49 UTC

WHY ARE YOU MORE AMAZING THIS COMPLETELY CAPITALIZED COMMENT MAKES MY LIFE. -flails back at you-

soulnet_haven October 15 2007, 09:52:11 UTC

*_______* I was feeling so deprived of pin fics then I read this and I was blown away.

It's so sad but beautiful at the same time.. I liked the way how you described the situation and made it so seemingly real...Jin's loneliness, insecurities and the support from his friends...

And of course, with the added bonus of Yuu and Ryo cameo appearances~^^

Quickly saves it to memories* Thanks for sharing this lovely fic~♥♥♥

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 22:10:57 UTC

aghsljdsh -honored- Thank you so much! (I want more Pin fic too! What is this lackage lately.)

Hee, Yuu and Ryo appearances make my life. =)