Comments | inevitabilityy: 08; [fic] pieces of the sun (pin; 1/1)

inevitabilityy

08; [fic] pieces of the sun (pin; 1/1)

Oct 15, 2007 01:45

Result of two nights' obsessive typing:

( I wanted to walk on the sun, Jin confesses, until I was eight and someone told me I'd burn up if I did. )

fic: je, i owe a lot of fic, pin, fic

Comments 64

8lucky8 October 15 2007, 06:52:41 UTC

that was really good,
i felt so bad for jin. he want pi so badly but didn't do anything about it for a while.
but it was a really good fic

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 07:05:02 UTC

Thank you!
I really wanted Jin to do something too.
>> Ahem. But then there wouldn't be much of a story.

saturnianlove October 15 2007, 06:54:06 UTC

YES YES YES YES YES
oh my goodness, I really really like this!!
there are just so many little things I want to quote back at you. Yamapi being easy and loving everyone and Jin wanting him all to himself (I've been wanting possessive!Jin recently! how did you know xD), going to the sun together, Jin wanting to hold hands,

I love you, Yamapi, I love you I love you I love you.
asdhkasjdhh ahhhh too cute ;__;

and beautiful crooked teeth. I love Yamapi's teeth. I just. This was so sweet. ♥

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 07:07:01 UTC

First - YOUR ICON!!!11! -dies- That's amazing.

Thank you so much, omg whee~ (Obviously I am psychic? Well, Jin's fun to write at any rate.)

ME TOO. Yamapi's teeth = ahjgkhlgs -incoherent-. Thank you thank you thank youuu ♥ ♥

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inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 07:09:15 UTC

Pin are such dorks, I love them best that way. Aw, thanks, I was trying to go for realistic with the whole Jin-in-LA thing (which I use altogether too much as a plot device >>) and the ending was really the hardest part for me to write - I am half dead to the world.

Anyways, thank you so much! ♥ ♥

annnimeee October 15 2007, 07:15:54 UTC

PIN FTW!!!

I love the description of Pi loving everybody. because he totally does. <3

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 07:20:38 UTC

afjdhslsdgjlh Pin is so my OTP, no matter what I've written :((( they are so cute.

Ah, I love Yamapi/everyone! He's so. Eager and awkward and aw. ♥ ♥ Thank you so so much!

pashoshi October 15 2007, 07:28:21 UTC

Aww, that's really sweet. I particularly like the beginning because my favorite part of Pin fics always seems to be the Ryo cameos it's an interesting look at Yamapi, but the whole fic is good.

inevitabilityy October 15 2007, 22:06:02 UTC

Ryo is in every single one of my fics, me, biased, what. Thank you a lot a lot a lot.