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indyhat

Safe - Chapter 26

Aug 05, 2007 20:52

Characters: Peter/Claude-centric ensemble
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for implicit violence
Word count: 1,100
Spoilers: AU, but up to 1.15 ("Run!"), to be safe.
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the words.
A/N: Today we're playing catch-up with a few different characters, and we meet a new one ( Previous chapters)

( The man walks slowly, shoulders bowed beneath the weight of his own thoughts )

sylar, hana, hiro, heroes_fic, heroes, ando, fic, safe

Comments 43

betterthanlegos August 5 2007, 20:24:32 UTC

"I could teach you about women."

Anders flees.

*Dies*

Rather liked this as usual. Keen :)

indyhat August 5 2007, 21:08:42 UTC

*g* Anders spends so much time thinking about women, but they terrify him! ;)

Glad you liked :)

futuresoon August 5 2007, 22:07:30 UTC

You and your making Sylar exactly like he was in the show--I want inaccurate happy AU Gabrielness, dammit! (Like you had the very first time you showed him, with Mohinder...but noooo, you had to go and be all canon.)

Hanaaaaa. Men's clothes, oh yes! I like her already. (Partly due to the flirting. I can see her having a mean streak.)

Hiro's getting mindwiped? Why don't I remember this? Waugh, I need to reread everything! waugh.

indyhat August 6 2007, 07:03:41 UTC

You and your making Sylar exactly like he was in the show--I want inaccurate happy AU Gabrielness, dammit! (Like you had the very first time you showed him, with Mohinder...but noooo, you had to go and be all canon.)

*g* This is not the fic for Mylar fluff. Except maybe a little bit - but not really.

Hanaaaaa. Men's clothes, oh yes! I like her already. (Partly due to the flirting. I can see her having a mean streak.)

Hana has more balls than Anders ever will (and I don't mean to imply by that that she's a transvestite! That's ... another fic entirely. Hee.)

Hiro's getting mindwiped? Why don't I remember this? Waugh, I need to reread everything! waugh.

Well, last we saw Hiro, the Nazis had him. That's all - I mean, I don't think you missed anything more substantial.

Thanks for reading!

futuresoon August 6 2007, 13:25:40 UTC

(and I don't mean to imply by that that she's a transvestite! That's ... another fic entirely. Hee.)

I want to see this another fic entirely. It must be known.

indyhat August 6 2007, 13:36:51 UTC

You should write it, then! I don't think I'm going to ;)

visiblemarket August 6 2007, 01:07:28 UTC

Yay! Hana! Totally didn't expect her to show up but she's awesome. Does she send telegraphs with her mind? Is that her power? Does she have a power? Is this all something we're going to find out later?

And then she notices his stare and stares back; Anders suddenly develops an interest in the paint-spattered floor.- Hee! Oh, Anders.

And aww, Gabriel...he just needs to find Mohinder and I'm sure he'll give up all the crazy murdering people. Really.

Speaking of, I don't remember, but was the waitress he killed Charlotta? I thought so but I wasn't sure.

Glad to see at least part of your writing block has lifted!

indyhat August 6 2007, 07:15:27 UTC

Yay! Hana! Totally didn't expect her to show up but she's awesome. Does she send telegraphs with her mind? Is that her power? Does she have a power? Is this all something we're going to find out later?

*g* No more caffeine for you.

I actually only thought of Hana's involvement as I was writing this (I needed a character ... she popped up). However, maybe she can be useful later. I seem to be throwing so many plots in the air with this story and just hoping some of them stick!

And aww, Gabriel...he just needs to find Mohinder and I'm sure he'll give up all the crazy murdering people. Really.

*g* You guys are the biggest Mylar cheerleaders I've ever seen. Um, Gabriel/Sylar's destiny has to play out a bit, yet.

I don't remember, but was the waitress he killed Charlotta? I thought so but I wasn't sure.

It was hinted at, but never said explicitly.

Glad to see at least part of your writing block has lifted!Thanks! I've been struggling with the next Peter/Claude chapter for a week, so I chickened out and wrote this one instead (since ( ... )

visiblemarket August 6 2007, 11:47:14 UTC

No more caffeine for you- Ha! You think that's me on caffeine? Please...that's me when I get home exhausted from work and find my favorite story up! I get excited.

You guys are the biggest Mylar cheerleaders I've ever seen. - Well when you write them both so well...what can you expect?

It was hinted at, but never said explicitly.- I actually went back to read that bit and yeah, it seemed quite obvious then.

I had a bit of a breakthrough last night though so hopefully the next chapter will catch up with our boys again.- Yay! That is exciting!

indyhat August 6 2007, 12:24:37 UTC

Please...that's me when I get home exhausted from work and find my favorite story up! I get excited.

This is your favourite story? :D Awwwww. *blushes* Thank you!

Well when you write them both so well...what can you expect?

*doesn't know where to look* Uh ... thank you :)

*goes off all giddy*

Thread 23

cucumber_k August 6 2007, 04:02:00 UTC

Poor Anders, he would die at the thought of internet porn. Had he accepted Hana would probably just spank him.

Sylar is so scary and so canon! I love him.

So I guess Mistery Sock will appear soon :)

indyhat August 6 2007, 07:18:22 UTC

Poor Anders, he would die at the thought of internet porn. Had he accepted Hana would probably just spank him.

LOL! And now suddenly it's Hana the cross-dressing Amsterdam dominatrix ... *sighs* I swear, I started out trying to do these characters some justice ... hee.

Sylar is so scary and so canon! I love him.

Thank you. Am amused because half of the people reading seem to want me to stop making him canon and just get him together with Mohinder, already. Hee.

So I guess Mistery Sock will appear soon :)

Well, he doesn't have a huge part to play in this story (though he does, I guess, provide a bit of a McGuffin), but we will be seeing him briefly again, on and off (we met him once before, although it was a short scene).

Thanks for reading! :)

visiblemarket August 6 2007, 17:57:06 UTC

And now suddenly it's Hana the cross-dressing Amsterdam domintrix- Well, she does wear a lot of tight, black leather...that's canon, at least.

indyhat August 6 2007, 18:54:47 UTC

True, true ... she's our very own Trinity.

whatwas August 6 2007, 05:41:09 UTC

great chapter hun..... it kind of makes me sad to see Gabriel turning into Sylar, but I suppose that's the way the story has to go....

and poor anders I totally lol-ed at this: "Don't they have women where you come from?"

and I also loved how you ended this chapter with telegram....

can't wait for the next chapter.

indyhat August 6 2007, 07:20:15 UTC

great chapter hun..... it kind of makes me sad to see Gabriel turning into Sylar, but I suppose that's the way the story has to go....

Ah, finally someone who isn't begging me for Mylar! *g* And thank you.

and poor anders I totally lol-ed at this: "Don't they have women where you come from?"

*g* I had fun, writing that. Poor Anders ... he's led a fairly sheltered life. Isn't used to Amsterdam's artists' quarter and its unconventional ways. (Temptation to have him seduced into an absinthe bar = immense, but our story must press on)

and I also loved how you ended this chapter with telegram....

Thank you! Was quite pleased with that :)

Thanks for reading, hun. I hope not to be as long with the next chapter as these last two took.

whatwas August 6 2007, 14:47:43 UTC

Ah, finally someone who isn't begging me for Mylar! *g* And thank you.
[laughs]......... well now that you mention it...... j/k...... I think you had Mylar-y parts in one past chapter where they were getting to know each other, etc., but I'll happily follow you where ever you take the story....

Thanks for reading, hun. I hope not to be as long with the next chapter as these last two took.
can't be much worse than me trying to finish the last part of my PWP (but not really PWP)...... it's been what 3 weeks now since I posted the last entry...... *oy vey*.....
*stares at word document*.......
*headdesk*

indyhat August 6 2007, 14:51:55 UTC

I think you had Mylar-y parts in one past chapter where they were getting to know each other, etc., but I'll happily follow you where ever you take the story....

That's very sweet of you, dear. There might be a smidge more Mylar in the story but I need to write those two somewhere else to do them justice.

can't be much worse than me trying to finish the last part of my PWP (but not really PWP)...... it's been what 3 weeks now since I posted the last entry...... *oy vey*.....
*stares at word document*.......
*headdesk*

Oh, bless. *pets* I'm trying to finish some PWP here, and if I can get it up (ha ha) today, maybe that will help.