Comments | ikangtvxq: [Fic] Choices (formerly Silver Thread) (7/?)

ikangtvxq

[Fic] Choices (formerly Silver Thread) (7/?)

Mar 24, 2011 14:20

Title: Choices
Pairings: Yunho/Jaejoong/fic
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: character death (later), teenage pregnancy, mild language
Genre: friendship, drama
Summary: This is a story about a suicidal moron and a moronic martyr...

Chapter 1 ; Chapter 2 ; Chapter 3 ; Chapter 4 ; Chapter 5 ; Chapter 6 ; Chapter 7 ;

( Yunho's face paled. My stomach lurched and my breakfast threatened to come out and soil the floor. )

dbsk, drama, jyj, silver thread, friendship, fanfic, chaptered, tvxq

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ikangtvxq March 24 2011, 19:34:29 UTC

Lol, all yours! ;)

shinchul303 March 25 2011, 00:25:12 UTC

This has been MIA for a LONG time. Glad to see it back!

shinchul303 March 25 2011, 00:39:48 UTC

This was good. The insight you bring to Dr. Shim's POV is appreciated by us reader's without a medical background. It's been so long since this update I'll have to delve back and reread before I can say anything more coherent.

Hope the next chapter comes along soon! I've missed this story.

ikangtvxq March 27 2011, 02:59:47 UTC

Hi! *waves* Sorry for the long wait! I'll try not to take almost five months to update next time *sheepish smile*
Ah, I had to search the net for pregnancy complications, and ask my mom for additional information, so I'm glad my explanation seems easy enough to grasp.
Thank you so much for still reading this! :)

daemoncas5 March 25 2011, 02:26:12 UTC

OMO NEW CHAPTERRRR!!!*POKE THE SPOT*
shall read later,,university sucks i need to go to class right now CIAO

ikangtvxq March 27 2011, 03:00:54 UTC

Spot's yours! ;) Yep, college sucks. Take your time! ^^

cioly March 26 2011, 09:32:17 UTC

Yaaaaaa! Why did you stop there????T^T
I want more~~~*sulking*

I must say you really did a good job portreying all the characters,I mean, I've come to hate Mr and Ms Choi even if they were minor caracters,and also to love Dr Shim who seems to care for the boys...
I really like Yunho and Jae's personalities and Yunhei is indeed a brave girl :)
I hope Jae finds his reason to live(maybe to raise the child? I have this feeling that Yunhei and Yunho are going to die buut I would be glad if I'm wrong)
I'll be selfish again and ask you to update soon ^^
oh and thank you^^(dunno why this update didn't show in my friend's page)
and sorry for the long post,I'm not usually like this and it's only your fault :)(not that I mind)

ikangtvxq March 27 2011, 03:18:34 UTC

Haha, the cliff hanger is evil, I know *cackles evilly* I couldn't help it. It seemed like a good place to stop =)
I had the Dursleys in mind when I was writing Mr. and Mrs. Choi. They're a despicable lot, that they are ^^ That conversation with Dr. Shim was hard to write T_T I hope I made him sound at least smart... I'm also trying to give Yunhei a little bit more personality ^^
Good guesses about what's going to happen, but I won't be telling yet ;)
You being selfish urges me to write, so be as selfish as you can ^^ I'll try not to take so long in updating next time. And my reply is long because your comment is long, and I acknowledge that the fault is all mine :) Thanks for reading!

daemoncas5 March 28 2011, 07:01:31 UTC

omg 3 days since i'm spotting...haha im fail ( ... )