Comments | ifshehadwings: Maybe We're Torn Apart [Cookleta, NC-17]

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Maybe We're Torn Apart [Cookleta, NC-17]

Jan 22, 2011 21:45

Title: Maybe We're Torn Apart
Author: sophie_448
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Cookleta, Cookmann (past), Neal/Kira (implied)
Word Count: 618
Warnings: Angst, graphic m/m sex, top!Archie, kind of an asshole Cook, general lack of fluffiness, unbeta'd
Summary: Dave is totally fine. That's what he tells himself.
Notes: Title from "Empty" by The Click Five

( And I've even wondered if we should be getting under these sheets )

fandom: american idol, pairing: neal/kira, fanfic, pairing: cookleta, length: 0-999 words, pairing: cookmann, rating: nc-17

Comments 31

otherbella January 23 2011, 03:25:38 UTC

Dave realizes abruptly what he’s done. Probably knew all along. Archie doesn’t have a thing for him. Archie is in love with him. And Dave just slept with him because he misses his ex.

Oh the ACHE.

hurts. so. much.

Beautifully written though and I am super intrigued by this world, whether it goes on, destroying everyone else in the vortex or that's just that.

sophie_448 January 23 2011, 05:25:12 UTC

Thanks, bb! It always means a lot when you like something ♥

I ... may or may not be working on a sequel. I don't actually know where it's going, though. Guess we'll see!

mmonroebpd January 23 2011, 03:28:38 UTC

Awww poor cook.....

mmm toppin' archie. luv that.

good work!!

sophie_448 January 23 2011, 05:25:43 UTC

Thanks! I'm always glad to find other top!Archie enthusiasts ;-)

asweetdownfall January 23 2011, 03:30:09 UTC

algdsjgsljgls Oh, Cook. You silly, silly, man. WAKE UP AND REALIZE WHAT YOU HAVE GEEZ.

I adore this. And your writing is so gorgeous and searing and lamgfldgmsl THE TOP!ARCHIE PART WAS MAGNIFICENT. Way to hit all my kinks, yo.

sophie_448 January 23 2011, 05:26:43 UTC

Thank you so much! I do love my top!Archie *g*

myhiddeneyes January 23 2011, 04:06:42 UTC

Aww, this just broke my heart.

Dammit, Cook, do you have to be an ass?

sophie_448 January 23 2011, 05:27:59 UTC

IKR? I swear when I started the beginning of this, I had no idea Cook was going to be an asshole and actually fuck Archie when he's not in love with him. I'm trying to fix it, though. I think. Maybe. Clearly I can't rely on these boys to do what I tell them.

myhiddeneyes January 23 2011, 14:33:49 UTC

I know what you mean, the boys can be so uncooperative.

soco63 January 23 2011, 04:54:41 UTC

ouch... poor Archie. Little does he know his heart will be in pieces in the morning. :( Nice job, but IT HURTS. lol

sophie_448 January 23 2011, 05:28:41 UTC

Thank you bb! IDK why I seem to come up with angst so often! I don't mean to.