Comments | ifshehadwings: Maybe We're Torn Apart [Cookleta, NC-17]

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Maybe We're Torn Apart [Cookleta, NC-17]

Jan 22, 2011 21:45

Title: Maybe We're Torn Apart
Author: sophie_448
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Cookleta, Cookmann (past), Neal/Kira (implied)
Word Count: 618
Warnings: Angst, graphic m/m sex, top!Archie, kind of an asshole Cook, general lack of fluffiness, unbeta'd
Summary: Dave is totally fine. That's what he tells himself.
Notes: Title from "Empty" by The Click Five

( And I've even wondered if we should be getting under these sheets )

fandom: american idol, pairing: neal/kira, fanfic, pairing: cookleta, length: 0-999 words, pairing: cookmann, rating: nc-17

Comments 31

sir_yessir January 23 2011, 05:23:49 UTC

oh my god

GO FUCK YOURSELF

OR OR OR

IDK

FIX THEM

BECAUSE THEY'RE BROKEN AND YOU BROKE THEM AND THAT'S NOT OKAY

oh but my god you make it hurt so good :(

No, but seriously - there are so few situations where I'll read top!Archie and find it believable rather than a little silly. You absolutely made me believe it. I could feel the way Dave ached for it, and of course Archie's going to give it to him, because he's Archie and that's what he does and UGH DAVE YOU ASSHOLE.

um. so this comment is kind of mean. but please know that i mean it all in a very very very good way. i'm just not good at handling angst. :((((((

sophie_448 January 23 2011, 05:39:46 UTC

LOL OMG. Please believe me when I say this is possibly the most flattering comment I've ever received. I LOVE YOU, OKAY?

I AM LIKE A TOP!ARCHIE CRUSADER OR SOMETHING. IDK. Although I honestly wasn't planning that going into this, it just kind of happened.

IN FACT. THE WHOLE THING JUST KIND OF HAPPENED. I KNOW. I KNOW THEY ARE BROKEN. I SWEAR I WAS JUST GOING TO WRITE SOME PINING!DAVE AND THEN HE WAS ALL "YOU KNOW WHAT WOULD BE A GREAT IDEA? I SHOULD GO FIND ARCHIE. HE WILL MAKE ME FEEL BETTER." AND I WAS ALL "NO, COOK. WAT. THAT IS A TERRIBLE IDEA. DON'T DO THAT." BUT WHAT DO I KNOW? I'M JUST THE WRITER.

Seriously, though. I already started a sequel. Which, I am not in general a sequel type person, but there ya go. I don't really know how it's going to turn out yet, but ... I hope I can fix them! DDD-:

sir_yessir January 23 2011, 05:43:24 UTC

IKR, SOMETIMES THE CHARACTERS JUST DO THINGS AND YOU'RE LIKE "DUDE, WAIT, WHAT? NO!" AND THEY'RE LIKE "YEAH, BUT YEAH!" AND YOU'RE LIKE "OH FUCK, FINE, GODDAMMIT."

So yeah, I totally know what you mean, and I forgive you for breaking them AS LONG AS YOU PROMISE TO TRY AND FIX THEM. Pretty pretty please with whipped cream and top!Archie on... well, on top.

sophie_448 January 23 2011, 05:47:34 UTC

YES, THIS. EXACTLY~

LOLZ. I promise! ♥

like_i_love_you January 23 2011, 06:35:19 UTC

This is nicely written.

sophie_448 January 24 2011, 04:29:14 UTC

Thanks!

therealesther January 23 2011, 06:45:16 UTC

top!archie ftw!

david cook, i want to kick you D:

please fall for archie, he'll be so good for you!

sophie_448 January 24 2011, 04:29:40 UTC

Yay! So pleased to see so many top!Archie lovers here!

*sigh* I'm trying to make him, promise!

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sophie_448 January 24 2011, 04:30:22 UTC

I am! I'm not really sure where it's going tbh. I know where I want it to go, though!

Thank you!

james_padfoot January 23 2011, 10:50:15 UTC

oh god no. no no no no no no no no. noooo david cook. no. oh my god. oh my god. what is this. fix this.

sophie_448 January 24 2011, 04:30:56 UTC

*hugs you gently* sorry! I know, it's awful! I am trying to fix it, promise :-)