Drabble: Cheesy Pick-up Lines
Title: 5 times she thought Daiki was being cheesy for her but he wasn't + 1 time she found out that it really was for her.
Alt. Title: Cheesy Pick-up Lines.
Author: Aoki Reiko (ichigocherry)
Pairing: Arioka Daiki x OC (Laririt Line/ borrowed OC)
Type: Drabble (because it was meant to be a drabble)
Genre: Romance, failed attempts of Fluff, Friendship
Rating: G
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haha! oh gosh I was looking for this!!! ***^____^***
"No faiiiiir. I want to spend time with Line too!" <---- Dai-chan,WHY YOU SO CUTE!?
"But I'll look weird! I mean you're an idol; everything you wear will look good. Anything I wear will look nerdish and geeky." <----- SO TRUE! THIS IS SO DARN TRUE IT'S PAINFUL!!! >_<
"Are you saying you don't like my present?" He said with a hint of disappointment. *shoves Daiki inside my pocket* I'm getting this runt, I love his cuteness too much. haha!
"Look into my eyes… because in my eyes, there's only an image of you." KILL ME NOW!!!! I had to stop reading at this part because oxygen went low... *T^T* DAI-CHAN~
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i'll practically quote the entire thing, so i've decided to stop.. haha! I need to breathe... but i really have to quote this one for Inoo... hahaha
"I promise to kill that guy when I meet him, okay?" Line smiled meekly with tears running. Kei and Line shared another hug. " ( ... )
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I am so happy that you included me in your dedication! What's with the awesome present? It' not my birthday yet. Honestly, the pick-up lines were so cheesy but having Daiki say them, argh! My poor heart! I really love this story! By the way, the quote above is one of my faves.
Why does Line have to leave everytime in any story? Wicked girl.
With this fic, (and DaiKeiLine) it feels like it's my birthday too!
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I honestly made them very cheesy. I blame the internet, haha! I kept cringing at the lines because I can't stand cheesiness. Haha! I'd laugh, like what Line did. :p
I'm very very very happy you like the story! 8D;; and relieved too. Thank you. <3
I guess her fate's already bounded with that fact. She's an exchange student, sooner or later, she has to leave. Be it for a few weeks, a few days or forever. We may never know~ .... Oh wait. Hahah! I forgot you're on of the first who read the manuscript. :p
Let's just make it an advance birthday present, then! xD
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We seriously should make Line Japanese the next time so she doesn't have to leave all the time!
My birthday came in too early, thank youuuu!
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It's u kindly offering to save a spot for me in denial
well, sorry for commenting late. internet line sucks like hell O.o
Can't Daichan be cuter than this awww...
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It's understandable. I think my posts doesn't pop up in any of you guys' f-list. I don't know how to fix it. =x
Honestly, I think he can. xD
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now that u mention it.. maybe something to do with the settings..
like this?? *point to my icon*
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I love this so so so much... Thanks for writing this for our beloved ate aem...
Dai-chan is so cute... I want to make him smaller and put him inside my bag.
LoL.
I read this whilst taking a break on revision.
It's definitely worth it.
Yappari~ I can't go on hiatus since I can't help but to read awesome fics like this...
*hugs*
Otsukare... :)
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It was deff my pleasure~
Well Daichan is alrdy small so... =x
Daiki: hey!
Oh, ganbatte ne?
/hugs attack!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this hazel-chan!
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Hahahah!
You really did your best to come up(or search) about this lines ne~
good job! :)
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Some of them are real life situations. xD;; I mean the lines so yeah. heheh
Thank you, thank you. <3
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I really love this ;)
I wanna squeal while reading it but I'm in school so I can't
That's how good it was XD
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