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Drabble: Cheesy Pick-up Lines

Jan 02, 2012 01:32

Title: 5 times she thought Daiki was being cheesy for her but he wasn't + 1 time she found out that it really was for her.
Alt. Title: Cheesy Pick-up Lines.
Author: Aoki Reiko (ichigocherry)
Pairing: Arioka Daiki x OC (Laririt Line/ borrowed OC)
Type: Drabble (because it was meant to be a drabble)
Genre: Romance, failed attempts of Fluff, Friendship
Rating: G
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subject: inoo kei, drabble: cheesy pick-up lines, !birthdayfic, subject: hey! say! jump, subject: original character, subject: arioka daiki

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ichigocherry January 1 2012, 17:41:59 UTC

immortalsummer's spot!

immortalsummer January 4 2012, 23:28:54 UTC

"Line could feel someone behind her and she tensed up. The person behind her rested his head on her shoulder."

I am so happy that you included me in your dedication! What's with the awesome present? It' not my birthday yet. Honestly, the pick-up lines were so cheesy but having Daiki say them, argh! My poor heart! I really love this story! By the way, the quote above is one of my faves.

Why does Line have to leave everytime in any story? Wicked girl.

With this fic, (and DaiKeiLine) it feels like it's my birthday too!

RELEVANT ICON 8D <3 ichigocherry January 5 2012, 08:24:07 UTC

The dedication? Naaah, I just wanted to. I guess I just love the pairing too much. haha! xD but srsly. LOOK AT MAH ICON. Haha!

I honestly made them very cheesy. I blame the internet, haha! I kept cringing at the lines because I can't stand cheesiness. Haha! I'd laugh, like what Line did. :p

I'm very very very happy you like the story! 8D;; and relieved too. Thank you. <3

I guess her fate's already bounded with that fact. She's an exchange student, sooner or later, she has to leave. Be it for a few weeks, a few days or forever. We may never know~ .... Oh wait. Hahah! I forgot you're on of the first who read the manuscript. :p

Let's just make it an advance birthday present, then! xD

Re: RELEVANT ICON 8D <3 immortalsummer January 5 2012, 16:03:22 UTC

The icon! Yes, I see it! Aw my Daiki. <3

We seriously should make Line Japanese the next time so she doesn't have to leave all the time!

My birthday came in too early, thank youuuu!

Re: RELEVANT ICON 8D <3 ichigocherry January 6 2012, 02:39:47 UTC

/pinches his cheeks

True, but that'd take out the fun. 3:

You're welcome! <3

Re: RELEVANT ICON 8D <3 immortalsummer January 7 2012, 06:40:23 UTC

I guess the fun with DaiKeiLine is the limited amount of time they're together.

This may sound complety whacked but I didn't cringe at the cheesy pick-up lines. I let those cheesy lines out all the time. Or maybe it's because I'm biased towards Daiki.

PS: The fluffiness I get from this is overwhelming! *Now I have this stupid grin on my face as I go to bed tonight.*

Re: RELEVANT ICON 8D <3 ichigocherry January 7 2012, 06:50:32 UTC

I guess so. If I could, I would give them all the time in the world~

Naaah, I think I even understand why you're like that. xD I bet Line that I know from Unfinished wouldn't be affected by the cheesiness. xD

Trust me. You're not the only one that's biased. :P

That'd be osm. haha! Better wipe it off before someone calls the emergency line. :p

immortalsummer January 4 2012, 23:30:10 UTC

PS: Thank you for reserving me a spot! *Hugs*

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