Fic: "And what I'm seeing is super, super cute" 5/5? R

[i_longtobe]

"And you want me?" She asked, her voice faltering on 'want'.

"Rachel," he started.

She pouted, averting her eyes.

"Of course I do. More than anything." He finally gave in.

"Then show me."

//

"Tonight," he said reluctantly. "At my place. I at least owe you that."

He was painfully aware of the fact that Rachel was still on his lap.

"What about..."

Terri

Comments

[infinityonhigh2]

Whoah that was beautiful! I loved the ending, especially the fact that Will sang Your song to her,which is one of my favourite songs of all time. Amazing ending, I am very sad it has come to an end though. You have to write more epic fic for this pairing :)

[i_longtobe]

Thanks for sticking with me through this whole thing :P I probably will, though I didn't know what i was doing AT ALL for this one seeing as I just entered the world of fanfic like a MONTH AGO and have no previous writing experience. I really do them for my own entertainment more than anything else.

ok im gonna shut up now before i write a book :P

thanks again for reading =)

[natashkah]

I LOOOOOOOOOVE IT OK WAIT

[i_longtobe]

thank you SO MUCH. ACTUALLY. YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY.

LOL @ THE WEBCAM THING. IF YOU COULD SEE HOW INTENSELY I AM SMILING RIGHT NOW YOU WOULD LAUGH.

[hermiones_twin]

I ship Will/everyone (except the people he's with in the show, pretty much), but I ship Will/Rachel really hard, 'cause I'm totally that girl that crushes on teachers/professors/etc.

I find a lot of people make Rachel obnoxiously needy in W/R fics, but you capture both of them really well. This was very sweet and not over the top. Good job. :)

[i_longtobe]

thanks =)

[i_longtobe]

aw, thank you so much!! you're so sweet =) and yeah.. sorry for like COMPLETELY stretching it out too long. I would get annoyed by that too :P LOL. Thanks for continuing to comment, I don't know if you realize how you're one of the few people that made me want to keep writing. =)

[baronessabba]

Such a wonderful part, but I'm sad it's the end ;) Please, please, PLEASE tell me you'll write another Rachel/Will fic. Or anything else, but write please. Preferbly Will/Rachel. It was such an amazing story. Truly can't wait for more from you.

[i_longtobe]

ahahah thank you so much =) I plan on it, they're my OTP. Ok well I keep switching back and forth between them and wemma but I think Will/Rachel is more fun to write because (unfortunately) it's never gonna happen on the show =(

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[wistfulwatcher]

Aw, what a great ending to a great fic. It was very sweet, and satisfied my Ruester needs quite nicely. Thank you :)