Fic: "And what I'm seeing is super, super cute" 5/5? R
"And you want me?" She asked, her voice faltering on 'want'.
"Rachel," he started.
She pouted, averting her eyes.
"Of course I do. More than anything." He finally gave in.
"Then show me."
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"Tonight," he said reluctantly. "At my place. I at least owe you that."
He was painfully aware of the fact that Rachel was still on his lap.
"What about..."
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let me just scroll up
and paste all the parts i loved
... ok that would just require me pasting the whole story
soo LMAO ill just say I LOOOOVED ITTT OKAAYYY (and if u dont believe me, next tuime i read a fic of yours, im gunna read it on my dad's laptop and u can seee my face on webcam LMFAO)
BEST PARAGRAPH EVER: “Don’t stop,” she urged him on. He began moving faster as she adjusted to the rhythm of his body, both of them completely oblivious to the marks she was leaving on his back. She alternated between panting and moaning - mostly, his name - and despite her attempts to stay quiet, succumbed to the buildup of pleasure with a cry so loud she feared she wouldn't have a voice tomorrow.
AND BEST LINESSSS EVERR:
“I told my dads I was sleeping over at a friend’s house.” She said.
“Tell them you’re going to be spending a lot of time with this friend.” He smiled, unable to remember the last time he was this happy.
He was at a loss for words. How do you tell someone just how amazing they are?
“Wow,” he echoed. She smiled. "Rachel, you're..."
He didn’t know how to let her know just how gorgeous she was without sounding completely cheesy.
“You look amazing.” She said. “It’s a wonder every girl in the school isn’t in love with you.” He wondered how every boy wasn’t in love with her.
SOOO CUTE =D<3
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LOL @ THE WEBCAM THING. IF YOU COULD SEE HOW INTENSELY I AM SMILING RIGHT NOW YOU WOULD LAUGH.
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