Comments | i_17bingo: LJ Idol, Week 3: It’s a trap!

i_17bingo

LJ Idol, Week 3: It’s a trap!

Nov 17, 2010 09:21

Comments 33

majesticzaichik November 18 2010, 14:31:10 UTC

I didn't think this was long at all. It really was the perfect length for the scene you were trying to convey. Nice job.

xreesex November 19 2010, 06:54:33 UTC

Loved this, didn't go where I was expecting it to.

zehlyah November 19 2010, 16:01:25 UTC

I really liked this. Fantastic ending =)

the_vernacular November 20 2010, 04:09:41 UTC

I liked the ending of this, it was refreshingly unexpected. Like you said!

hosticle_fifer November 20 2010, 04:29:51 UTC

I agree with the comment above - this wasn't very long at all. It flowed very smoothly, grabbed me straight away, and had a great arc and ending. Great entry!