Comments | i_17bingo: LJ Idol, Week 3: It’s a trap!

i_17bingo

LJ Idol, Week 3: It’s a trap!

Nov 17, 2010 09:21

( Feeling dizzy )

lj-idol, max, writing, lisa

Comments 33

tigrkittn November 20 2010, 04:57:36 UTC

That was fun! And not at all too long.

poppetawoppet November 21 2010, 02:42:30 UTC

Ha!

I had something similar happen to me out of high school. Except over email. :D

gaea_rising November 21 2010, 05:34:10 UTC

I've had a similar experience; you captured it well. Good work!

dreamingaspen November 21 2010, 06:01:39 UTC

Nice. So many of us have totally been there.

crimsonplum November 22 2010, 05:33:04 UTC

This is so, so sharp. Your dialogue is great, your attention to detail is spot-on, and your grammar and punctuation are impeccable. It's everything I love in fiction. Keep it coming!