Comments | i_17bingo: LJ Idol, Week 3: It’s a trap!

i_17bingo

LJ Idol, Week 3: It’s a trap!

Nov 17, 2010 09:21

( Feeling dizzy )

lj-idol, max, writing, lisa

Comments 33

alphaloria November 18 2010, 01:46:06 UTC

Oh, very well done!

imafarmgirl November 18 2010, 02:05:41 UTC

lol. That's not how I was expecting that one to end.

team_jessie November 18 2010, 02:25:13 UTC

You did a great job of adding levity to a moment that's actually heavy enough to completely undo a friendship. I found myself laughing by the end.

GREAT use of dialogue!

sweeny_todd November 18 2010, 04:07:29 UTC

very nicely handled!

esotericsmile November 18 2010, 13:32:25 UTC

This was nice and well written.