and it's annoying ( Read more... )

i fixed the minor things in the other two most recent entries to the correct format. they were super small changes, but meaningful to me. so check those out if ya want.

i'm lame.

ballz.

for a while i promise- i know you're all probably getting sick of it. but i'm really curious about this one. comment, please.

american sex

it all ends the same;
the male pulling out
his glistening cock, coming
on the woman’s face,
balmy skin staring up
to the expanse of flesh,
bone, concentrated blood
and sticky hair-goddess
of erotic daydreams, screaming
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AND THIS ONE:

our lady of peace

cigarettes, pot, ice cream-anything
to make the depression
better-pills, films,
poetry on suicide and sex
and why death
is better than sex, and America-
with its ancestral lock,
citizens held paralyzed
in suburban, white-collar polity
by order of the holy spirit
and in the name of thy father,
assholes preaching
to the general ( Read more... )

Please give feedback. I'm being brave and actually posting something I'm really unsure of. So as I said, please give feedback.

the wax incident

sitting, smoking, staring
at the books on the shelf
that haven’t been read:
Mother Night, American Skin-
volumes upon volumes of literature,
anthologies, beautiful bodies
with undisturbed spines
when i noticed

the ( Read more... )

I love creating my own albums ( Read more... )

My pieces seem to be gaining a mind of their own. My poetry style seems to have lately become more blocky, serrated, heavy meaning sitting on each word and each space. It's not a style I've been fond of, but I haven't been un-fond of it either. I've always had a problem editing during poetry: I would try to control the piece, instead of the piece ( Read more... )

The format on "Part of the Equation" was shot. Dammit.

Not that anyone cares...

In perfect stillness ( Read more... )

I had a bunch of stuff due this morning via e-mail for the Kidd program. I worked on stuff for about 6 hours yesterday (yay Thanksgiving!) and finally got it done. First, a few weeks ago I had to come up with my LOI (line of inquiry), which is a theme that I will research for my work and write on, etc. The class is a year long class and by the end ( Read more... )