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hurinhouse

Traveling is More Fun with a Navigator

Jun 04, 2013 02:23

Title: Traveling is More Fun with a Navigator
Author: hurinhouse
For: Sheenianni for WC Pairings
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Mozzie, Neal
Word Count: 3,107
Summary: Coming together is a beginning; keeping together is progress; working together is success ~ Henry Ford
( Traveling is More Fun with a Navigator )

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Comments 24

kanarek13 June 4 2013, 09:51:03 UTC

Whee \o/ Team Mozzie and Neal \o/ Love it, the humor, angst, Mozzie's paranoia and Neal's somewhat childlike innocence and excitement - awwww :D

Really great :D

hurinhouse June 6 2013, 05:06:04 UTC

thank you!

sheenianni June 4 2013, 10:00:02 UTC

Interesting and unique. It's sharp, somehow, and a darker portrayal of Moz than we usually see. Here, he's not just the quirky friend - he really comes across as his own person and also as a truly skilled and calculating criminal. The implications about Neal's sketch... wow ( ... )

hurinhouse June 6 2013, 05:08:32 UTC

well don't you think that's usually the case, when we reread fics? i often find something new each time, depending on length. that's the great thing about stories - each reader processes in whatever way works for them. i'm so glad you liked this. i hope that break is in your near future. thanks!!

elrhiarhodan June 4 2013, 11:48:26 UTC

I love this fic so very much. You've not only captured the essence of the relationship between Neal and Moz, but you've given us their true voices. As I read the story, I can hear them in my head and see everything play out.

Friendship and loyalty and trust - that's what this journey is about. Brava!

hurinhouse June 6 2013, 05:11:08 UTC

ah the best compliment - their true voices. i've often wondered how they evolved to what they are today.

thanks!

embroiderama June 4 2013, 12:39:20 UTC

This is great! I love Mozzie's POV here and the view he gives us of Neal and Neal's "training."

hurinhouse June 6 2013, 05:13:20 UTC

thank you - i think that in the privacy of his mind mozzie probably gives himself more credit than is his due with neal's education. although, i've always thought mozzie made the man more than adler did.

sinfulslasher June 4 2013, 19:32:21 UTC

This was absolutely amazing! I love Moz, but you managed to show us a new side of him that makes me adore him even more. What a wonderful way to weave canon into this, and to show us glimpses of Mozzie's friendship with Neal that we might have seen hinted at on the show, but never explicitly explored.

Great stuff!

hurinhouse June 6 2013, 05:14:31 UTC

thank you - i love sprinkling a bit of canon here and there, hopefully w/o overdoing. i'm glad it worked.