Comments | hp100: A Separation of Forces / Half In, Half Out / The Indignity of it All / Cheap Tricks

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A Separation of Forces / Half In, Half Out / The Indignity of it All / Cheap Tricks

Jan 12, 2007 17:21

Title: A Separation of Forces
House: Hufflepuff
Word Count: 100
Characters: Ron, the Trio.
Author's Notes: These four go together; the first two read well on their own, but the last need their context to work.

( When the Ministry fell, the war started in earnest. )

millicent bulstrude, rating: pg, slytherins, trio, challenge: balance, death eaters, author: kaesa, ron weasley

Comments 4

treehugginhippy January 13 2007, 03:26:29 UTC

I really liked these... I rarely feel anything for Millicent, and I've never seen her in a fic before. Congrats for going in a totally unexpected direction!

flammablehat January 13 2007, 04:20:37 UTC

ooh, the last line in #1 = ouch. i don't get much out of reading ron, but you struck right on my one source of empathy with him. nicely done!

sanggre_gaia January 13 2007, 05:10:59 UTC

I loved how you portrayed Ms. Bulstrode here. Well done! :)

wirelesstouch January 13 2007, 09:29:19 UTC

Those were all really good together! I especially liked the last two. Great job!