House Of The Rising Sun (8/?)

Jan 20, 2012 15:16


Title: House Of The Rising Sun (8/?)
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: Nc-17
Summary: It’s been the ruin of many a poor boy and god I know I’m one.
Disclaimer: Not real.

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pairing agger/torres, daniel agger, the house of the rising sun, fernando torres

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katiebooth1983 January 20 2012, 16:48:06 UTC
Oh geez Mou's a bastard! Not that i was expecting him to be a saint or anything. Poor Fernando is trapped there :(

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hope_and_heart January 24 2012, 00:34:45 UTC
He is, I think irl he kind of looks like he has the potential for being so creepy so I don't feel guilty about making him that way :P
Thanks huni ♥

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hope_and_heart January 24 2012, 00:38:08 UTC
Haha yeah, smart but evil kind of sums him up in this.
I'm glad you think it was fluffy (kind of :P) but Mou is like a little black rain cloud just spoiling everything for them.
It does make sense. I agree with you, everything has changed, there was no going back before but now they've kind of sealed the deal. I think saying 'I love you' in any relationship changes things.
Thanks babe ♥

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guttergirls January 21 2012, 13:36:23 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, they really love each other!!! <333

Which makes Mou seem all the more evil with tying Nando to him! *shakes fist at Mou*

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hope_and_heart January 24 2012, 00:40:41 UTC
They do. Fernando wouldn't risk it for anything less.
Mou is evil. He knows he's onto a good thing with Fernando, he's gorgeous (obv ;P) and he was so young when he met him and as an adult HoTRS is all Fernando knows.
Thanks babe ♥

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elisa88 January 21 2012, 21:04:15 UTC
So Mou is a bastard. I knew that, but he's basically making them his slaves!! Poor Fer, I really hate the situation he is in, but at least for now Danny is making it bearable, right?? I almost wish Nando was ugly and a really bad fuck so no-one would pay him and so Mou releases him -if only-.
God, I don't even want to think about what they will have to pay for going behind Mou's back.. DAMN! Nando's family should run away first and then they can leave and Mou will have nothing against them... right??? =/

ps.: the Xabi and Stevie cameo made my day XD (and of course this entire add was perfect!)

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hope_and_heart January 24 2012, 00:47:55 UTC
Yeah that's basically what it comes down to. He sees what he does as a business and essentially to him, they're not people, they're his property.
Yeah, I think before Dan he was okay because he didn't know any different or have anything to hope for but now Dan's making him happy but it's a double edge sword because he knows what he's missing now, if that makes sense?
Haha got to love Xabi and Stevie, they'll always be the best bromance ;) It was the Istanbul kiss. There just is no competing with that ;P
Thanks hun ♥

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elisa88 June 5 2012, 21:20:18 UTC
I just re-read this entire story. So uh-mazing, so beautiful and breathtaking!
Whenever you have time, please continue it, pleaaasee! I really need to know what's going to happen to them now.

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alana2x1 January 21 2012, 21:57:52 UTC
Just what I needed after that rubbish match v Bolton. Thank god for good fanfic to pick me up, haha.

I loved that they kept saying 'I love you' throughout this. The repetition helped to really instill how much their relationship had progressed and was just all kinds of adorable, really :')

The conversation about Mou and the possibility of Fernando just leaving was just so heartbreaking. He gave up his freedom to help his family :( Now he feels like he owes Mou so much and can't drag himself away, even with Dan there. Horrible. Stupid Mou and his stupid club :/

I can sense (and not just from present!Dan) that this 'past' story is starting to come close to the big climax. Scared would be an understatement. Cannot wait to read about the big break though. Really loving it so far :D

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hope_and_heart January 24 2012, 00:52:36 UTC
I missed the match because I was at work and I'm glad I did tbh but I'm glad I could help a bit :3
Yeah it's all new and exciting for them and for the time being at least that's the main thing on their minds.
That's it exactly. He sacrificed his freedom I guess, to help them and a part of it is gratitude and he feels bound to him because of that.
The past story is climax is getting closer, I think I have a few more things for Dan to remember first but it's building. I'm worried to :P I know what I have planned I just hope I do it justice haha!
Thank you so much hun ♥

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