Title: House Of The Rising Sun (8/?) Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres Rating: Nc-17 Summary: It’s been the ruin of many a poor boy and god I know I’m one. Disclaimer: Not real.
Fuuuuck... I'm so gutted already, I think with every chapter you post this hurts a little bit more. Fernando's story, how he stumbled into this, why he can't just leave even if he wanted, it's really well explained I think. And now I'm at the point where I can't wait to see what all this has been leading up to as much as I'm dreading it. *sigh*
I feel kind of evil saying I'm glad that it hurts. Not in a bad way obv, but you know what I mean :P Thank you, I'm glad you think it's well explained, Fernando's not exactly a typical prostitute (even if he is good at it) and I think that's a big part of the reason Dan fell for him, the contrast of his character and what he does. If that makes sense? I'll try not to leave you in suspense for too much longer :P Thanks babe ♥
Yeah pretty soonish though 'Present' Dan has a few more memories first. I'm not making any promises :P I don't really know how it will end myself yet. I have a few things in mind but I think it's best to just see where it takes me. If that makes sense? Thank you so much, I'm really glad you think so :3 ♥
I really love this fic, I'm constantly checking for your updates!!
This chapter was really beautiful with them confessing their feelings but the shadow of mourinho is large! I hate him already !! The story of Fernando is heartbreaking and also the way he explains it as if isn't a big deal sacrifice his life for his family. He deserves better!
I can't wait to the moment they meet again. Looking forward for more!!
Thank you, I'm glad you like it :) I'll try to be better with updating, real life got in the way and I've been horribly busy but it should be more regular now. Yes, Mou is definitely a large shadow, I think even when they're happy or saying I love you, his presence is felt esp at the HoTRS. I think Fernando doesn't think it's strange, that he should give up so much to help them. He's definitely not the martyr kind but what he did was selfless even if he doesn't really see it that way himself. Thanks huni, I'm glad you like it :3 ♥
i love how you described Mourinho there. love him or hate him, he's quite the character.
Fernando probably never imagined what's in it for him, so now he's kind of trapped. and poor Dan too, because he seems to want something else already, so this means he's trapped as well.
I'm glad you think so ;) Haha yeah I think love him or hate him Mou is definitely interesting. He's so sinister. I don't think I've ever written a character quite like it before. In my head he's very mafia boss-esque :P I think he knew enough but I don't think he ever imagined just how far it would take him or what it would entail exactly in terms of how long Mou would keep him. And Dan is definitely stuck with him now because as you said, he wants something else, which I suppose is only natural. Thank you so much hun :) ♥
Ahhh, great part. Damn, I would have loved to see Daniel and Fernando in a Roman orgy. Or even having sex in the party. But I love the part where Daniel bristles when Mou touches Fernando.
HEE and the laces in Fernando's costume.
It's sad that the chapter had to end on a low note. Now I'm scared of Mou even more, and even more depressed for Fernando.
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Thank you, I'm glad you think it's well explained, Fernando's not exactly a typical prostitute (even if he is good at it) and I think that's a big part of the reason Dan fell for him, the contrast of his character and what he does. If that makes sense?
I'll try not to leave you in suspense for too much longer :P
Thanks babe ♥
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Fernando's story? oh god.
I'm really curious about how you'll end this and I really hope it will be a happy end or as happy as it can get.
Thanks for this, it's beautifully written :)
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I'm not making any promises :P I don't really know how it will end myself yet. I have a few things in mind but I think it's best to just see where it takes me. If that makes sense?
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you think so :3 ♥
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This chapter was really beautiful with them confessing their feelings but the shadow of mourinho is large! I hate him already !! The story of Fernando is heartbreaking and also the way he explains it as if isn't a big deal sacrifice his life for his family. He deserves better!
I can't wait to the moment they meet again. Looking forward for more!!
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I'll try to be better with updating, real life got in the way and I've been horribly busy but it should be more regular now.
Yes, Mou is definitely a large shadow, I think even when they're happy or saying I love you, his presence is felt esp at the HoTRS. I think Fernando doesn't think it's strange, that he should give up so much to help them. He's definitely not the martyr kind but what he did was selfless even if he doesn't really see it that way himself.
Thanks huni, I'm glad you like it :3 ♥
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i love how you described Mourinho there. love him or hate him, he's quite the character.
Fernando probably never imagined what's in it for him, so now he's kind of trapped. and poor Dan too, because he seems to want something else already, so this means he's trapped as well.
loved it, more!!
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Haha yeah I think love him or hate him Mou is definitely interesting. He's so sinister. I don't think I've ever written a character quite like it before. In my head he's very mafia boss-esque :P
I think he knew enough but I don't think he ever imagined just how far it would take him or what it would entail exactly in terms of how long Mou would keep him.
And Dan is definitely stuck with him now because as you said, he wants something else, which I suppose is only natural.
Thank you so much hun :) ♥
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HEE and the laces in Fernando's costume.
It's sad that the chapter had to end on a low note. Now I'm scared of Mou even more, and even more depressed for Fernando.
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