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svtstarlight May 31 2009, 20:45:41 UTC
*sadface*

So angsty... <33333

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holykeebler216 June 1 2009, 04:41:07 UTC
i know! the angst. i cant get away from it.

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followurdestiny May 31 2009, 22:24:17 UTC
Ughh *cries* ...
The realization hits Hankyung but not really, because he already realized what was happening two days ago without actually…well, realizing. It doesn't hurt his heart like he thought it would, because it already did a while ago when he wasn't paying attention, too busy watching Heechul’s hips and kissing the corners of his smile. It’s almost like there wasn't anything to end in the first place.

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holykeebler216 June 1 2009, 04:41:34 UTC
aflajksfd im so glad you picked that quote ♥

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yesunglover May 31 2009, 23:52:38 UTC
Amazing

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holykeebler216 June 1 2009, 04:41:44 UTC
thank you :)

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mo_chan_tf June 1 2009, 03:01:36 UTC
So... sad. Although I can really imagine Heechul getting bored or annoying out of the blue and... breaking up. =/ The fact that he doesn't say what he -should- have said to Hankyung is also fitting, too, though I wish they'd worked it out... ._.~

The scene where Hankyung is picking his things up from the floor is actually a good metaphor. It's like he's picking up the little pieces of him that Heechul had and really leaving him... which is even more painful. ;-;~ Oh well, I love angst anyway, so... XD~ *sighs*

Thanks for writing this and for sharing! :3

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holykeebler216 June 1 2009, 04:43:04 UTC
you got it perfectly. thank you for reading so deeply into my fic, its comments like these that make it great to write :)

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yum_gums June 1 2009, 04:14:56 UTC
it's soooo sad coz it's true. heechul seems like the type to "get up and go" just because he's bored. good for hankyung that he isnt all that crushed about this.

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holykeebler216 June 1 2009, 04:44:13 UTC
hate to admit it, but i suppose i'm kind of like heechul here

thank you for reading <3

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